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Forever

My dear love,gaze within your heart And feel the love thats growing Where the divine petals start And the trembling flowers glowing. Where dovelike stars in towering light Bears the seeds of beauty Upon the breastplate of your heart Love has done its duty. Feel the stems, the hidden root Of loves soaring height Ride the wind,the happy wind That takes us out to flight. My dear love,tread no more in sadness Your mourning heart so deep Take my hands and fly with me To the brinks of heavens peak! FOREVER

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/26/2013 11:46:00 PM

Hello M&M, , Thank you for spreading and sharing your kindness. You know me I’ will always enjoy stopping by with love and support, no matter if I do not Understand what I am reading at times. I am very grateful and thankful to all who have been supportive of me one way or another. Your heartfelt words are the main attraction of who you are… Thanks for your inspiring visit. ----- Happy Thanksgiving ~ LINDA

Wayne Hill

Date: 9/16/2013 7:47:00 AM

the last stanza takes this poem to knew heights....well done.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/6/2013 11:06:00 AM

VERY BEAUTIFUL MY FRIEND I REALLY ENJOYED

Kelly Deschler

Date: 9/1/2013 4:54:00 PM

Great poem, once again! I love the rhyme scheme that you used, it flows nicely within these lines. Superb poetry!

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 8/29/2013 2:48:00 AM

LIKE A LIGHT WITH ITS ENERGY GLOWING BEAUTIFUL PIECE MY OLD PAL

Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 8/30/2013 4:21:00 AM

Thank you my friend. Its so nice to hear from you.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/27/2013 2:24:00 PM

a very beautiful poem, my friend. sixth line just say "bear" Luv, Andrea

Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 8/30/2013 4:22:00 AM

Thank you my friend. Its so nice to hear from you.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 8/20/2013 7:47:00 PM

any time any where dearest friend lol. M.M again you excel this is gorgeous love it such a lovely flow love Shadow xox smile

Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 8/30/2013 4:27:00 AM

lol thanks my friend. So nice to hear from you.

Ralph Mason

Date: 8/19/2013 9:25:00 AM

lovely poem mustapha. warm thoughs, Ralph

Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 8/30/2013 4:26:00 AM

Thank you Ralph for your kind review on my poem.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/18/2013 7:38:00 AM

tugging at the heratstrings, mus...i Iike the lilt of the emotions that carry such a depth of feeling...wonderful piece!..:) huggs!

Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 8/30/2013 4:25:00 AM

Thank you Nette for your lovely review. Its so nice to hear from you. Hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/18/2013 6:31:00 AM

Ahhh!!! Passionate and romantic work that touches another's inner being..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my work..It was good to read the comment very uplifting..Sara

Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 8/30/2013 4:20:00 AM

Thank you Sara for your lovely review. Its so nice to hear from you.