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Forever

This is a song we worked on a while back - my friend Ashly and I. It's actually an a cappella piece. Some words I have forgotten. Enjoy! ----------------------------------------------------------------- Break me Take me away From here Leave me Here in this place Forever Now I'm alone and there's nowhere to hide These scars are hidden deep inside The shadows consume me Watch me die Forever Wake me Out of this dream That's real Kill me Lost in this pain I can't feel Now I'm alone and there's nowhere to hide These scars are hidden deep inside The shadows consume me Watch me die Forever Clutch in this pain Nothing matters anymore Feeling forever Alone Leave me here in this place Forever Now I'm alone and there's nowhere to hide These scars are hidden deep inside The shadows consume me Watch me die Forever x2

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Lisa Cooper

Date: 5/16/2012 6:43:00 PM

Love is undieing and will surely endeavor, through tears of joy the heart loves forever. Your poem hit a tender spot in my heart. thank you for that! :)

Cindy Lu

Date: 5/15/2012 10:17:00 AM

very deep expressions. Forever doesn't exist on this eath, Thank God! Cindy nicely executed.

Cindy Lu

Date: 5/15/2012 10:17:00 AM

very deep expressions. Forever doesn't exist on this eath, Thank God! Cindy nicely executed.

Daver Austin

Date: 5/12/2012 3:59:00 PM

This is one hopeless situation, and you bring it out beautifully. You say you are writing a book and part of it takes place in or around Pike's Peak, I lived in the Springs for 12 years, taught at the College and climbed half way up Barr Trail many times. Just thought I might garner some chat. Love, daver

John Rhinem

Date: 5/9/2012 7:51:00 PM

Ps. Smile ˜ "I Knew A Beautiful Laura Here At PoetrySoup Once Upon A Time * If Your Own Beauty Is But Half As Beautiful As She Then, Yessss, You Are Definitely 'A Beautiful Woman, My Love, Forever;'" John!:) ˜

Date: 5/9/2012 7:53:00 PM

...."Thank You, For Your Wonderful Visits, 'Beautiful Laura.'" *

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/8/2012 5:23:00 AM

A pleasure to read your poetry today Laura. I will try to come back later this week to read more. I have a spring cold and not up to reading for too long. Have a wonderful week. Love, Carol

John Rhinem

Date: 5/7/2012 2:11:00 PM

Smile ˜ Hey Beautiful Laura, We're On Our Way Baby Girl Sooo, Hang In There My Love * Tis My A Cappella's Response Unto, This Endless Beauty Of You, My Dear Sweeet Beautiful Laura * Yet, I Think That Your Precious, Priceless Beauty, Has Already Known These Notes * Kissing, Your Beautiful Heart * My Love, Forever & For Always; John!:) ˜

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 5/7/2012 6:28:00 PM

Well, thanks. I am glad you liked my poem! :D

David Williams

Date: 5/7/2012 1:36:00 PM

Laura, difficult to get without a beat, but cool words..David

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 5/7/2012 6:27:00 PM

Thanks. ;-P

Terry O'Leary

Date: 5/7/2012 1:35:00 PM

Very nice.... I bet it would be even nicer sung with the msic... Terry

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 5/7/2012 6:28:00 PM

Aw, thanks. :]