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On a day of wedded bliss and joy, The blackest night came crashing down. A heart so full of love and tenderness, Beat no more upon this earth. In its wake was left a lake of tears, And a man who lost his moorings. Adrift upon the waters of despair, Left to face the storms of life alone. The years have steadily rolled along But time for him is just a word In his heart she lives forever. Forever young, forever loving, Forever loved…Lenore. Dedicated to HGarvery Daniel Esquire and his late wife Lenore

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/16/2010 8:43:00 PM
MY LOVE BARBARA, I read this and Feel such Honor knowing YOU have met Lenore through my Writes I LOVE YOUR HEART and most of All I LOVE YOU I will Always be YOURS (If YOU will have me I LOVE YOU ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 1/15/2009 9:16:00 AM
coo tribute imagery was great 2
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Date: 1/9/2009 7:24:00 PM
This is an Amazing poem, beautifully embraced and thoughtfully expressed, Awesome tribute...May God bless you and keep you. Tyesha
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Date: 1/8/2009 12:35:00 AM
A sensitive tribute Barbara especially the imagery in the 2nd stanza ,a poem within a poem almost.Rgds Brian
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Date: 1/2/2009 9:48:00 PM
Beeg, Barbeeg YOU. I know YOUR on line Lets talk I keep reading " FOREVER " over and over again It brings me such JOY LOVE YOU Forever Xliamp...HG
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Date: 1/2/2009 9:27:00 PM
this is beautiful simply a wonderful read and such a beautifully wonderful thing to do for someone to bestow such an honor onto him God Bless
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Date: 1/2/2009 9:02:00 PM
Beautiful dedication. Lovely, tender and thoughtful. You have a lovely heart. Wonderful write. Love, Robin
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Date: 1/2/2009 7:52:00 PM
Beeg, This POEM is so Therapeutic I have not felt this elated in many Years I Thank-YOU for YOUR LOVE and Understanding You can read me like a book ( page 12 ) Barbeeg Always YOURS Xliamp...HG
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Date: 1/2/2009 7:46:00 PM
great write. simply a great write- love and peace james
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Date: 1/2/2009 6:05:00 PM
Barbara if you only knew what a wonderful thing you have done for this dear, sweet, loving man. I say from my heart, thank you, for I know you have lifted his spirits to the sky, in this thoughtful, caring gesture of a beautiful poetic dedication. I know of no one who has loved like him, who has suffered for so long, who has endured a loss so painful, that our hearts can feel his heart and his eternal love for his angel, Lenore. I thank you, for this man is very special to me. Love, Shar
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Date: 1/2/2009 3:46:00 PM
Dearest BEEG , My most BARBEEG If YOU look inside my Heart right now and felt the JOY it is beating through my Soul We Thank-YOU for bringing Us TOGETHR Again I will "Forever" be indebted to YOU Now it's my turn to HONOR YOU By Monday night I will Dedicte a poem to YOU. I would like to enter it in Tracy Decker's RSVPOETRY Contest Hopefully YOU will be HONORED To all the SOUP FAMILY All My LOVE to My BARBEEG : "Barbara Gorelick" Xliamp Forever YOURS...HG
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Date: 1/2/2009 2:15:00 PM
Great tribute Barbara, I enjoyed reading it's timeless words. Good job and keep up the good work. I hope you have a blessed new year...Raul
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Date: 1/2/2009 11:08:00 AM
What a heartfelt dedication, to someone who will always cherish his Lenore. Sad and sweet. ~ Carrie
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Date: 1/2/2009 9:48:00 AM
Very nice dedication Barbara. Loads of images that sails through the poem. Nice work.
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Date: 1/2/2009 9:30:00 AM
I like this
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Date: 1/2/2009 9:05:00 AM
This is so sad, to be faced with the loss of the love of your life..Blessing to you, and yours, always, Christy
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Date: 1/2/2009 9:05:00 AM
A heartrending tribute to Daniel's beloved wife... full of striling language and imagery. Well done Barbara! Best wishes, Keith (PS don't forget 'Nightscapes...')
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