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Forest Trail

I am the forest trail steep and dangerous expansive and free my rocks could be your bearings or they could give away under your feet I can offer water and refuge or a maze tight as a wreath colours from sky to soil air organic and wild you might question the way you used to breathe climb great heights trip on roots wrought deep find views not to be forgotten tame the animals you meet life here perseveres even when it is delicate and thin and many trample on the trail to explore what's within but the guides warn do not disturb the earth for once you pluck what's living there's only diminishing returns now the streams are hissing moon and stars are reminiscing you took only a leaf but I can feel suddenly it is missing.

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Date: 4/19/2024 6:17:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 6/13/2020 4:17:00 PM
I love forest trails and I loved this poem. A fave ~ John
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Date: 7/19/2017 10:54:00 AM
You grabbed me with the first line and held onto me until the end.Thank you for the wonderful journey on this beautiful forest trail.
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Date: 5/27/2017 2:13:00 AM
Every line thrills me Feel I could take it up from where it stopped
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Date: 11/15/2016 6:30:00 PM
Metaphorical magic!
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Krystal Cochrane
Date: 11/18/2016 1:55:00 PM
Thank you Richard!
Date: 11/1/2016 2:31:00 PM
I loved this Krystal, it was as if I was on a journey through your words and as I took in the beauty I also learned not to disturb it, or else. Really nicely done.
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Krystal Cochrane
Date: 11/1/2016 9:17:00 PM
Thank you. I really enjoy your thoughtful comments on mine and other people's poetry.

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