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Forest Stroll

I take a stroll one fine fall day And stop to look around Forest life is always at play Listening to sweet forest sound So many things for me to see Looking above or on the ground Squirrels that jump from tree to tree Sending leaves flying through the air One leaf comes floating down on me. So serene no sorrow nor care Can plague me when walking here It's beauties in fall so rare Sweet forest in my heart held dear You are medicine for my soul I feel your presence ever near A dear runs fast his eyes like coal He looks so frightened rushing by. To run from me his only goal So many treasures within you lie And here I'm close to Him Looking down or to the sky Even though here lights are dim I feel the peace in every limb. Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 09.05.2014 1st place win

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Date: 9/19/2014 12:59:00 PM
Nicely done, congrats on your win :)
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Date: 9/19/2014 1:42:00 AM
Wow Brenda that's a great one! So smooth flowing ,,perfect nice rhyming words! Big congrats on huge win!
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Date: 9/18/2014 6:19:00 PM
Thank you so much for the kind words and congrats on your win as well!! I love a nice walk through the forest and this helped remind me why!
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Date: 9/18/2014 12:33:00 PM
Good write. Congrats.
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Date: 9/18/2014 10:28:00 AM
Brenda, Congratulations.... Linda
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Date: 9/18/2014 6:57:00 AM
so serene and beautiful a walk you led me to with this wonderful piece, Brenda! Congrats!
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Date: 9/18/2014 3:48:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Brenda it was great to read this again:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 9/6/2014 2:36:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your walk with nature..It is nice to be able to go into the woods to take a stroll and view the beauty..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/6/2014 2:37:00 PM
Thanks Sara.
Date: 9/5/2014 11:38:00 PM
This is very nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/6/2014 8:22:00 AM
Thank you Charles.
Date: 9/5/2014 5:09:00 PM
I feel refreshed after walking through your forest.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/5/2014 5:45:00 PM
Glad to hear that Richard.
Date: 9/5/2014 3:04:00 PM
I have never seen this form before Brenda it is lovely - adore the imagery in your poem especially 'A dear runs fast his eyes like coal' Hugs Jan xxx
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/5/2014 3:27:00 PM
I never seen it neither but wanted to give it a try. Thanks for stopping by.

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