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Forest Storm

pine trees and branches scattered on the forest ground ~ a collapsed woodland strong hurricane winds ravage pines in the forest ~ windswept aftermath 6/4/23 Contest: Show don't tell, tell don't show poetry contest. Sponsor: Dilly Dally (howmanysyllables used to check syllable counts)

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Di11y Da11y

Date: 6/12/2023 11:07:00 AM

Great comparisons Tania. Congratulations on your placement and thank you for taking the time to support this contest.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/12/2023 12:56:00 PM

Dilly, thank you for my placement and a really fun and challenging contest. I look forward to more of your contests!

Lin Lane

Date: 6/12/2023 10:08:00 AM

And now congratulations for having your Haiku on the winning list!

Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/12/2023 12:56:00 PM

Lin, thank you, hugs.

Lin Lane

Date: 6/10/2023 8:43:00 AM

There's quite a difference between the two. Well done, Tania!

Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/12/2023 12:56:00 PM

Lin, thank you.

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/4/2023 3:55:00 PM

Tania your haiku set is a stunning portrayal of great imagery. The description of the pine trees and branches scattered on the forest ground, as well as the aftermath of the windswept hurricane that ravaged the pines, is truly remarkable.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/4/2023 4:38:00 PM

Lasaad, thank you.

Jan Allison

Date: 6/4/2023 2:45:00 PM

excellent ink so well described Tania, I find it hard to write haiku at the best of times! hugs jan xx

Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/4/2023 4:38:00 PM

Jan, thank you, hugs.