Forest Still

Sunlight filtering on moss dampness that blankets the silent forest. ~~~~~~~~~~~~ for Raul Moreno's contest ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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Olajide Adelana

Date: 10/15/2009 4:08:00 PM

Good job man

Syed Amaan Ahmad

Date: 10/3/2009 9:10:00 AM

Good one!

Juliane Thomas

Date: 9/17/2009 8:26:00 PM

I love haikus, and haikus about the forest are among my favorites. Moss in particular has always been one of my favorite things. It feels so soft and cool on bare feet! Beautiful image in this haiku and good luck in the contest! Thank you so much for your comments on my poem "The Game of Life"! ~Juliane

Farah Chamma

Date: 9/17/2009 2:45:00 AM

A very beautiful Haiku Sue...good luck... always, Farah

Elaine George

Date: 9/14/2009 1:05:00 AM

Simply beautiful! Sue. lainie

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/13/2009 12:36:00 PM

gentle....comforting. Light & Love

Brian Strand

Date: 9/12/2009 12:47:00 AM

Best wishes with this one Sue.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today

Abe Lopez

Date: 9/11/2009 6:59:00 PM

sunlight is the fuel that keeps the earth thriving! very nice.....

Date: 9/11/2009 6:06:00 PM

You paint a picture with words in this one. I like how you end with the "silent forest"--leaves the reader with something to think about. Good luck in the contest. Have a good weekend. Karen

P Sheart

Date: 9/11/2009 12:05:00 PM

Hi Sue An awesome Haiku! Good luck in Raul's contest hun. A winner either way for sure. Hey, also thanks for your suggestion to enter contest too and for your most welcome comments. Sending good thoughts your way. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia

James Peranteau

Date: 9/11/2009 11:45:00 AM

This is definately a great Haiku Sue,...hey,..that ryhmes ! *smiles* Great entry ! james

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 9/11/2009 6:30:00 AM

hey mom, this is a wonderful piece and it 's just nice for Raul's contest. i love you passion and poetic prowess. check your soupmail box. love, Adeleke

Robin L. Gass

Date: 9/10/2009 8:21:00 AM

Lovely work, Sue! It is so nice to read your words again and be back on the site. Raul Is going to have his work cut out for him with this contest. Good luck! Love, Robin