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Forest Shower

FOREST SHOWER From the steaming highway Stopped for a light looking through A giant peering in woodland so thick and deep in thought No thunder nor lightning the mood is mild Promenade but a moment’s estimate Thirsty forest trees with half-wet stature hug in the dark forest glade So quietly drenched the scene the freshness a million tiny eyes within without The chatter whether angry or happy shelter Drops from high above mingle symphonic in the mist Pristine as it might have looked those past thousands Serenely innocent Perhaps a meadow with sharp hooves plashing puddles Happening on roses wild a few A stream trickled down from distant height so marvelously clean unobtrusive Oh to go down on both knees drink from white hands Wild flowers unknown uncultivated a treasure of weeds All is wed in perfect loneliness An ancient hunter’s blood recalled To run To cool the feet To bathe body and spirit Just to walk through such weeping nature? Oh no! Sacrilege! Invasion! No! Leave I must while the freshness the aroma lasts A final glance A shiver Eyes fixed for a second Stealing memory most dear Seeping storing in soul’s special place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/25/2011 10:39:00 PM
daver. I'm on a very tight schedule for time these days. otherwise, I'd search out an oldie of yours. HOpe to see a new poem from you soon. You are one of my faves to read. And I bet you sure could understand my wooing poem! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 7/8/2011 4:15:00 AM
This is wonderful verse Daver. The imagery is so clear I could see the scene playd out in my mind's eye as I red. I could feel the emotion as you feel it's too beautiful to be sullied by Man's presence. Exceptional. From one to seven I give it a ten. God Bless, JB
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Date: 6/24/2011 1:35:00 PM
Very creative and expressive work..I can just see that thick forest..Enjoyed reading this afternoon...Sara
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Date: 6/23/2011 9:02:00 PM
I just read the last part that says stealing memory. Like my poems said stealing time!! But yours is much better, like a small masterpiece, Daver. Seems like you are being very inspired these days!
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Date: 6/21/2011 12:50:00 PM
ohhh, drod dead enticing that drips of nostalgic impressions, daver... i want more! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 6/21/2011 11:31:00 AM
This is lovely, Daver! Surely a scene that would be difficult to leave. Gives me a sense of nostalgia...I share that "shiver", smell "the freshness", and keep this write, "storing in soul's special place". Makes me want to walk into a forest of tall, magnificent trees. Thought of you last night, they are looking for violinists in Montreal. I wonder if any will be using my bow? The luthier seemed to have had ideas for a new owner.:) Best wishes!! Love, Mikki
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Date: 6/21/2011 10:54:00 AM
Interestingly put together. An inventive write. Regards, Robert.
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Date: 6/20/2011 11:43:00 AM
very creative piece of poetry, enjoyed this one very much.
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Date: 6/20/2011 11:22:00 AM
Imagine seeing this "giant" while waiting at a stoplight! A sudden encounter with nature inspired an image and emotion-packed poem that is very special, Daver. This is a favorite for me. (Did you mean hooves "splashing" or is "plashing" a word I haven't heard of previously?) In any case, you took my mind and heart to a special communion with nature. Positively stunning! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/21/2011 11:32:00 AM
Right you are, Carolyn - should have been splashing. Plash sounded better to me, so I guessed at the word. Love, daver

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