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Forest Queen

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When trees awaken from their winter sleep Their silent buds unfold and turn to green Row upon silent row they gently lift Bare branches, no longer in winter’s keep Spring flowers burst from dormant bulbs unseen A gift Wearing her royal robe of blossomed trees Like a mist descending, this forest queen Blesses the forest paths with leaves adrift Paints with an ardent brush her verdure frieze. So swift Entered in A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CHOICE Contest Judged: 4/7/2022 1:12:00 AM Sponsored by: Brian Strand N/A Submitted to Writing Challenge - X'd Poems Second Chance Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France Curtal Sonnet (Short version) A curtal Sonnet has eleven lines with a rhyme scheme of abc abc dcb dc It has ten syllables in lines 1 through 5 and 7 through 10, however it has only two (2) syllables in lines 6 and 11, and they rhyme with lines 3, and 8.

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David Smith

Date: 4/12/2024 7:11:00 PM

This is what life is all about. Nothing more, nothing less. Just fine for me. You have a right to feel good about this one. Will have to read more of your work. Don't change your style it is a winner. Best regards from this young at heart 70 year old.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/13/2024 5:37:00 AM

I agree, David: To me nature is where it’s at and your comment is so nice. It made my morning. May we always be young at heart.

Constance La France

Date: 12/8/2022 5:20:00 AM

Suzannne, charming and entrancing poem of nature. Congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - X'd Poems Second Chance, I love your image and this form is wonderful, I must try to write one, well done, blessings

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/8/2022 9:09:00 AM

Thanks so much Constance: you have given me back faith in my writing. I first heard of this shortened form from Len Gasung. Read his poem, ‘My Saver Ming.’ Hugs, SuZ

Suzette Richards

Date: 11/18/2022 6:01:00 AM

A different take on the Curtal sonnet form. But as I am wont to point out, we can do what we like with a poem. And in this case, it resulted in an excellent poem about freeing spring. I love my peach trees as they are adorned with blossoms before the verdant buds appear. Now in November, the trees are laden with fruit, ready for the picking in a few weeks time.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 11/18/2022 11:35:00 AM

Thanks for the kind words, Suzette…..on my attempt at this sonnet type. On reading your articles I can see i am very much a novice but it is fun discussing and learning from you. I will check out your web blog. Best, SuZ

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/5/2022 5:49:00 AM

I like the images you painted of the emerging spring in exquisite detail. Lovely poem, SuZ.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/5/2022 8:57:00 AM

Thanks Vijay: So glad you enjoyed it. I like this Form a lot. Best, SuZ

James Marshall Goff

Date: 4/5/2022 5:10:00 AM

Sweet, flowing river of Spring SuZ, nice!

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/5/2022 8:44:00 AM

Thanks so much, James: You brought me a smile. SuZ

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/5/2022 12:36:00 AM

After a long winter she awakens and stands majestically in all her glory. A lovely time of year when everything comes to life. Tom

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/5/2022 2:56:00 AM

Yes. I agree, Tom: Nature is so inspiring. Have a wonderful day. SuZ

L Milton Hankins

Date: 4/4/2022 7:35:00 PM

Very nice, SuzD! I like this a lot, and I hope Brian does, too. Good writing!

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/5/2022 2:54:00 AM

Thanks for your encouraging words, Milton: My first try at a Curtal Sonnet. Quite interesting the way the story builds from matching rhymes. Best, SuZ