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Forest of the Ancient Oak

Nightly, I wander in shadows of a recurring dream and find myself wading through a shallow stream. The Ancient of Oaks calls from beyond the thickets, its gentle whispers mingling with chirping crickets. I cannot guide my steps in the direction of choice, for if I disobey, his leaves rustle in grumbling voice, "Enter the forest, child, without fear of what I ask. Moon and I will guide you with each virtuous task." In the forest of my dreams, my path alters each night. Sometimes I run to follow a nightingale in lofty flight. There are times when I must free myself from a maze, or suckle from mother fox, a kit waiting for her praise. One starless night, I stumbled on a gnarled tree root whose existence moments before, I dare not dispute, for the Ancient One is very aware of every step I take. Forest fauna watch over me 'til first light of daybreak. I am puzzled why a forest sylph, I was chosen to be. Ancient One said I would understand all the mystery when after the last of my journeys comes to an end, and I'd comprehend that my dreams were a Godsend. So I do not question when his branches point me East to right a wrong committed, turning famine into feast. Or travel North and South, tending a nation that bleeds, with a message to forests to provide for hunger's needs. Each morning I awake with the memory of my dream, my feet wet from wading through a shallow stream. Some day soon, I hope to learn the reason for my quest. Tonight I'll be in the forest when the sun sets in the West. April 17, 2021 In the Forest of My Dreams Contest Sponsored by Mystic Rose Rose

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Date: 4/22/2021 4:48:00 PM
Wonderful imagery and excellent rhyme! Awesome
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Date: 4/20/2021 8:38:00 AM
Beautiful metaphoric penning Jenna, - the quest. Your poem is as delicate as a dream floating through memory. Congratulations on your win.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/21/2021 4:06:00 PM
Thank you very much, Sam.
Date: 4/20/2021 3:44:00 AM
back to congratulate you, sweet friend. God bless you always. Love, Gina
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/20/2021 3:46:00 AM
Thanks, Gina.
Date: 4/19/2021 4:32:00 PM
dropping back with many congrats Jenna:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/20/2021 3:46:00 AM
Thanks for revisiting.
Date: 4/19/2021 2:50:00 PM
You took me on such a mystical ride here, couldn't take my eyes off the poem, congrats on your 2nd place win, and thanks for joining Jenna :)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/20/2021 3:45:00 AM
Thank you for honoring this write, Mystic.
Date: 4/18/2021 3:56:00 AM
Incredibly beautiful poem, Jenna. I read twice even with sound on as my computer permits me. A fave for me. Oh how I love such fantasy poems.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/19/2021 4:12:00 AM
You're always so kind with your thoughts, Thanks, Victor.
Date: 4/17/2021 11:15:00 PM
G'day Jenna ... this is a wonderful tale explained well in meter and rhyme. Loved reading this poem - thanks Jenna - Lindsay
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/19/2021 4:12:00 AM
Thanks so sincerely, Lindsay.
Date: 4/17/2021 6:36:00 PM
Absolutely breathtaking, Jenna. I love it. God bless you with a win, dear friend. Love, Gina
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/19/2021 4:11:00 AM
Thanks so much, Gina.
Date: 4/17/2021 12:58:00 PM
you are a wonderful story teller and such a gifted writer jenna, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/19/2021 4:11:00 AM
I appreciate your kind remarks, Jan. Thank you.
Date: 4/17/2021 11:14:00 AM
This is brilliant Jenna, if id read this somewhere else with no poets name against it I would have said it was written by Edgar Allen Poe. Quite dark and sombre. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/17/2021 11:30:00 AM
The pinnacle of a compliment for such a comparison. Thank you, Tom. It is somewhat envisioned in depths of darkness, but a heroine shall this child become...of some sort.

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