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Forest Choir

Melody of birds, Nature’s harmony in trees; Mantra of the woods.

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Abe Lopez

Date: 7/1/2009 8:35:00 PM

I love the sounds of nature. great job gangsta!

James Fraser

Date: 6/28/2009 11:56:00 AM

Chirp and cheerful this Haiku>>James

Cecil Hickman

Date: 6/27/2009 10:33:00 PM

articulately written with the sounds flowing from the lines of this Haiku,very well crafted,,and Thank you for holding the contest and for reading and commenting upon my words,,blessings..Cecil

Christopher Higgins

Date: 6/27/2009 1:52:00 PM

This piece is singing beautiful music to me ...I can hear the birds in harmony and the woods coming alive with their tunes...well done.

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/27/2009 1:18:00 PM

You do justice to this form, each and every day, Raul. As an added note, thank you for sponsoring the new contest...it is enjoyable to see how each poet finds unique and wonderful things in the same painting...each one takes a new twist..a lovely idea you had! :) Carrie

Jim Wilson

Date: 6/27/2009 10:45:00 AM

Paul, it seems like we had similar thoughts today; nature and the divine. Nicely done.

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 6/27/2009 10:14:00 AM

Wow, the singing of birds is peaceful. A mantra indeed, and great decriptions. Nice work. Love Elizabeth