Foreplay

First seductive moves and intimate touches Of bodily drive so hot and sensual, starting with no Rush or haste, just slower, slower and slow, then Engine gets heated up, everywhere becomes charged Points to specifically visit cannot be by passed Licks, sucks and massages in steady speed Acceleration kicks, desires burn into each other Yearnings sum up this outburst to begin the core

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James Inman

Date: 12/22/2015 8:12:00 AM

Very nice Acrostic, Funom, intimate and sensual.

Funom Makama
Date: 1/28/2016 9:57:00 AM

Thank you so much Inman

Julia Ward

Date: 6/8/2015 4:34:00 AM

An effortless poem to read, disguising the effort put in. A 7... Julia

Funom Makama
Date: 1/28/2016 9:57:00 AM

Thank you so much Julia Ward, its been a while

James Fraser

Date: 6/5/2015 2:48:00 PM

Love this Funom, you've taken this intimate moment to another level, smiles, James :) :)

Funom Makama
Date: 1/28/2016 9:56:00 AM

Thank you so much James

Daver Austin

Date: 6/4/2015 2:54:00 PM

A fine study for the 'minute' man, Funom. Many a discarded lover could benefit from your etude on patience. Love, daver

Funom Makama
Date: 1/28/2016 9:56:00 AM

Thank you so much Austin

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 6/3/2015 9:49:00 AM

Funom, you write with ardor passion burning within... ~olive eloisa

Funom Makama
Date: 1/28/2016 9:56:00 AM

Thank you so much Olive

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 6/1/2015 1:53:00 AM

What a fabulous write, so seductive and sensual,7! lol my body drive hot as I was reading it......excellent write Funom......A M.

Funom Makama
Date: 1/28/2016 9:56:00 AM

Thank you so much Afolabi

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/31/2015 11:59:00 AM

Very clever! i too feel. Rhythm speaks. Beautifully expressed. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Funom Makama
Date: 1/28/2016 9:55:00 AM

Thank you so much Devnath

Matthew Anish

Date: 5/30/2015 11:57:00 PM

Very clever! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Funom Makama
Date: 1/28/2016 9:55:00 AM

Thank you so much Anish

Casarah Nance

Date: 5/30/2015 2:47:00 PM

Oh I like it, I don't want to rain on your wonderful write but please look at your L line you used an I, even by switching it to Licks are important...every words you have here is sexy and seductive, nicely done.

Funom Makama
Date: 1/28/2016 9:55:00 AM

Thank you so much Nance