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Forceful Rebuttal

Believing prevarications, from you, confined, taking the route to the open lands, so blind, unsighted within alternative techniques, you and me in contact, two afflicted, combined, they always expressed the truth, we were unique. Uncanny combination, circumstance affairs, me acting out of regret, you acting debonair, answers left more questions, interrogation, believing actions set in motion, not repaired, I'm caught between two worlds, interpolation. Made your bed, now I sleep in deep ruefulness, no more direction, our existence unfruitfulness, characteristics, weak, broken mirrors bring trouble, I wake up in morbid decay full of dreadfulness, your excuses full of lunacy and forceful rebuttal. Written By: Laura Loo Date Written: February 16, 2016

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Date: 2/16/2016 5:27:00 PM
I'm feeling some frustration and anger here, Luloo. Very powerful write filled with angst emotions.
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Date: 2/20/2016 5:22:00 PM
Thank you Daniel..Be blessed :) -luloo
Date: 2/16/2016 4:52:00 PM
very dark and deep luloo:-( Such powerful imagery and great rhyme:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/20/2016 5:21:00 PM
thank you lady Jan...-luloo *smiles*
Date: 2/16/2016 11:25:00 AM
powerful write with great images of conflict, lou... much enjoyed!
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Date: 2/16/2016 1:45:00 PM
Thank you Nette :) you are always so sweet lovely lady! -luloo *smiles*

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