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Forcast: (Un)changeable

Cloudless horizons Cast shadows of doubt, The future is brewing; No escape route out. Murky, addled minds That knows no sense; Opinions left idle, Lingering on the fence. Shady recollections Of secrets well kept, Meticulously concealed; Persistently swept. Cascades of despair Pour down on poor souls; Drenched by ambition Of unreachable goals. Sweet, sunny sentiments Are salvaged in vain; These anchors in chaos Are tethered to pain. Stormy grey horizons Cast shadows of dread; The future’s unchangeable So just ignore it instead.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/24/2009 9:46:00 AM
Beautifully poised. Would you pls comment my poem- SevenDegrees...thankfully. Am looking forward to read more of your poetry. All the best.
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Date: 9/23/2009 11:14:00 AM
It seems everyone's heart is flowing over today. Makes for some exciting reading. Thank you for sharing yours with us today Charlotte. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/23/2009 9:37:00 AM
One to ponder ... smile ... excellent write here, Charlotte!! Welcome to PoetrySoup and hope you find this wonderful place brightens your future ...
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Date: 9/23/2009 8:57:00 AM
Like the metaphors in the verse. Good rhyme. Keep writing. Sara
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