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Forbidden Love

What is these furtive eyes trying to tell me…. Is it some emotion for me…could it be... first sight love… Oh, where were you while I lived for such a long time... Where were you while I endured those painful days... Look I’m here, hidden in a being, in a heart hardened might be with treachery… might be with unfaithfulness… Where were you…where were you my love when I looked for you in every corner of the world…like those passionate who forget the count of time, age and place…. Could it be that you were lost inside me; in the dawn of my youth… or is it in the secret realm of my femininity… These furtive eyes are telling me an old story… a story of love, so ardent,so ancient…a story counted over eras! This magical moment makes me feel a presence…. Oh…….the presence of a heart, at last! I can hear the ruffling of the pages of all the novels read. I can feel, in between the lines, how you flow like cool breeze… It tingles my dormant feelings so lazy to wake up. A shy smile dares touch my lips which tremble at the thought of being wiped away in jiffy! You’ve seduced me….yes…and... may be now you’re going to hurt me a little….. may be now you’re going to love me a little…. But, please never desert me again…. Ultimately, you’ll reside in me, hidden in the deepest corner of my heart. I’ll make sure you’re not exposed to the ruthless. There my love, you may grow like those flowers which never die! (This is the translation of one of my muse written in French that I have reviewed for this contest) 30/01/17

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Date: 6/14/2017 11:48:00 AM
A magnificent homage to love, Sunita, or who I now royally call: Lady UPD. Your sensitive pen pull the heartstrings so well, as if you know every suitor's tell. This poem has emotional depth, and articulated simplicity. Passionate poetry at its best. Much love and more love to you and yours.
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 6/14/2017 12:15:00 PM
Thanks for the so deep and encouraging words my friend. It is indeed an inspiration. God bless you :)
Date: 2/7/2017 11:06:00 AM
What an exhibition of superlative talent! You just know how to say it and show it! Excellent piece that I enjoyed reading! Pandita
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 2/7/2017 11:33:00 AM
Thanks so much Pandita for the warm words and the your kind visit. :)
Date: 2/5/2017 2:50:00 AM
"may be now you’re going to hurt me a little….. may be now you’re going to love me a little…." Love defined in these two lines. A wonderful write.
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 2/5/2017 4:50:00 AM
I'm so glad you read and appreciate those lines.You get it right! Love is described in so many ways. Enjoyed your poems. Thanks :)
Date: 2/3/2017 10:59:00 PM
Absolutely amazing and a very deep poem, Sunita.
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 2/4/2017 2:44:00 AM
I'm glad you appreciate. Your words are enlightening. Thanks Afzal. :)
Date: 2/1/2017 10:35:00 AM
Beautifully written Sunita.. Capturing the emotions of furtive hearts..A7
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 2/2/2017 7:39:00 AM
Thanks for your positive criticism and generous rating. I'm touched. Good luck. :)
Date: 1/31/2017 10:21:00 PM
Great emotional write sunita... Brilliantly done... A 7 for this deep write...
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 1/31/2017 10:59:00 PM
Thanks for the encouraging words and the high rating! All the best.:) Sunita
Date: 1/30/2017 11:15:00 PM
I loved the ardent passion and love that flowed in your lines. Dreamy...
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 1/31/2017 10:05:00 AM
Thanks Eileen...it's written from the heart! :D Thanks for you like it.:)
Date: 1/30/2017 4:02:00 PM
It should never be wrong to love. People change as do their surroundings. Brilliant write, Sunita:)
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 1/31/2017 10:02:00 AM
Yes you're right...but at time luck does smile on everyone where ever we are..thanks for the nice comment.G.Luck! :)
Date: 1/30/2017 12:28:00 PM
Beautiful poem my friend
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 1/31/2017 9:58:00 AM
Thanks for giving me your time for reading and appreciating it.G.Luck to you! :)

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