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Forbidden Love

Dine a la carte with my secret sweetheart a half dozen roses in differing poses champagne glass in hand soft notes from the band vows ever after sweet smiles and laughter eyes locked in stare romance in the air emotions a-brew old blending with new eyelids a-fluttering to whispered sweet nothings vows ever after sweet smiles and laughter Love ballad dancing and sensuous prancing a oneness of feeling and merging of being open-eyed nose-meet wings on the feet vows ever after sweet smiles and laughter Instead we are pained to outsiders chained with emptiness fraught our love counts for naught mere love poems writ twixt two lovers smit’ no vows ever after sweet smiles or laughter *******************************

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/4/2014 8:56:00 AM

This is a sad one.

Richard D Seal

Date: 8/15/2013 6:46:00 PM

Nothing worse than being smit when your chained. It's still a fantastic write Licia, Take care, Richard

Richard D Seal

Date: 7/10/2013 6:46:00 PM

Ahh you return, I have just seen your smile in the pic parade Licia and had to come and say welcome back. Now, this poem is a corker, You led me on with this right to the end, and those last two lines are crushing. Great write. Take care, Richard.

Skat A

Date: 6/1/2013 2:34:00 PM

Hi Delysia,, CONGRATS on your romantic win! ;-) ~SKAT~

Joe Maverick

Date: 6/1/2013 11:08:00 AM

Congratulations Delysia..super well done on the winning placement Joe..'

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/1/2013 10:03:00 AM

Delysia, , CONGRATULATIONS :-)* Thank you for the nice and sweet romantic poem... pin points the watering passion thirst I seek. Always & Forever..... PD

Kim Morrison

Date: 6/1/2013 5:02:00 AM

What a marvelously moving piece! Kim

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/3/2013 7:43:00 PM

wow, this is great but I see no congrats on it, didn't it get on the list?? I was really happy to find it because I think I have seen nearly all your poems, sweetie. On this one, I really love how you ended the poem too.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/3/2013 1:04:00 PM

This is awesome and sad. I'm faving this, my dear. I don't know how you managed to take us from the scene of true love to the harsh reality of forbidden love with such a beautiful rhythm. Just like the dance you were writing about. Life! Lovely, my dear...lovely write. BTW...thanks for going through my pics and for the lovely comment about my daughter. Of course, I agree, but then I am biased! :)

Nivitha Ann Paul

Date: 6/8/2011 10:05:00 AM

AMAZING..:)

Don Johnson

Date: 5/26/2011 3:34:00 AM

very bloody frigate good(almost swear word) the taste of love is understood, and it flows very well love it babe ...u did well come out of the corner:) xo Don

Chhutan Dey

Date: 5/25/2011 11:05:00 PM

heart catching imagery...loved it dear!

Joyce Johnson

Date: 5/23/2011 3:15:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in this fun contest. Love, Joyce

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/23/2011 3:15:00 PM

Congratulations on the HM win in the contest of paula, delysia

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/23/2011 1:17:00 PM

Congrats delysia on your HM in Paula's contest with this excellent entry luv.. enjoy your very special honor...

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/23/2011 1:12:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Paula's contest Delysia. Love, Carol

Ralph Taylor

Date: 5/23/2011 1:07:00 PM

Congrats, delysia. Excellent piece. Nice going. xxxRalph

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/23/2011 9:51:00 AM

Well done, Delysia. Congratulations on your success in Paula's contest! Love, Carolyn

Wilma Neels

Date: 5/22/2011 11:58:00 AM

This is quite a stunning piece Delysia, hope your weekend has been a good one.. try and stay warm with the few cold days they are forecasting for us in CT :) Good luck for the contest ;)

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 5/21/2011 5:54:00 PM

Wow this is amazing. you can't keep me in suspense I need more Wow

James Fraser

Date: 5/21/2011 7:05:00 AM

Wonderful read Delysia, most enjoyable. Keep them coming. Have a lovely weekend....:)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/20/2011 1:10:00 AM

D, very passionate... thanks for sharing,..p.d.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/19/2011 11:18:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your fabulous poetry today Delysia. It was a very interesting piece to read. Love, Carol

Jeffry Cohan

Date: 5/19/2011 10:49:00 AM

I THINK THE REST OF US ARE IN A LARGE ENOUGH NUMBER TO SUE HER IN A CLASS ACTION SUIT FOR MENTAL DISTRESS-CUZ SHE MAKES SO MANY OF US LOOK BAD~HON, SPOILIT MISAKE, CHANGE B4 BEING PUBLISHED. "DRIPPING LOVE GLOW" WHAT IS THAT, IT MAKES NO SENSE UNLESS YOU'VE LOVED, REALLY LOVED. AND TO END WITH SMIT INSTEAD OF SMITTEN WAS so u ...SO U CAN NOW TELL EVERYONE U have free cee's aproval I SPOSTED THIS AS I DID ANOTHER SUPER POET BECAUSE PEOPLE HAVE A RIGHT TO KNOW..fondly, your friend, ~free cee!~

Joyce Johnson

Date: 5/19/2011 10:39:00 AM

Too bad this is an illicit romance it sounds so wonderful. Nice to hear from you and glad I found you. I will be reading more. Love, Joyce