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Forbidden Fruit

* I live in a Paradise called Eden a serpent slithers through my tender branches, Adam and Eve picked from the fruit for feedin', no music played yet they enjoyed love dancin', when morning came the Sun awoke they vanished, God reprimanded them and they were banished...the Garden was destroyed forevermore and cause of these sinful parents our lives have many chores, God showed His angry wrath Paraduse Lost man now pays cost

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Date: 5/22/2010 1:29:00 PM
Satin, these shapes are not easy to do. I have done one, and I shirk at doing others. Good luck in Amy's contest >> James
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Date: 5/21/2010 6:13:00 PM
Nice thoughts. Fine layout
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