Forbidden Fantasy

Let me take you beyond the realms of realism and reality To a place of nostalgia, and forbidden fantasy Let’s head for the horizon of harmonious sinful bliss Discovering the universes, past nirvana’s abyss Journey into a world of erotic ecstasy Exploring our bodies beyond their boundaries Swim in the seas of my seduction and fathom its depths One mind, one body, one soul, one breath Ascending above my heavens, exceeding the skies Let’s quest, outside our flesh, as our spirits fly high Soaring, rising, defying the laws of gravity As I ride on the wings of your masculinity Chiquita Baity ^^li.^^

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Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 9/10/2011 1:30:00 AM

This is nice. soup mail coming

Chiquitachiamaka Baity
Date: 9/10/2011 3:44:00 AM

okay, thanks!!

M.I.A .

Date: 8/23/2011 2:13:00 AM

Honesty is the easiest language! ha3, Enjoyed this a lot :)

Terrell Martin

Date: 8/19/2011 8:44:00 AM

OK Chiquita - this one DEFINITELY gets my motor running - mentally, spiritually, philosophically and "otherwise". I'd be happy to circumnavigate the universe with you, love:) Also, thought you might like to know I added another verse to "Masters of Poetica." Thanks for your earlier sweet comments. Gotta go work on my masculinity now...Terry Martin

M. Hussain Effendi

Date: 8/19/2011 8:22:00 AM

WOWWW!

James Peranteau

Date: 8/16/2011 6:07:00 PM

Very hot dear poet ! I'm flustered, and fighting back the thought of....*smiles* ! Splendid write Chiquita ! Have a good one, and as always, I'm enjoying your writes ! Much love, james

Wole Francis

Date: 8/16/2011 1:34:00 PM

ANODA GUD ONE,its truelly a fantasy

Anthony O. Mitchell Jr.

Date: 8/15/2011 11:43:00 PM

Well-written piece here. A very appropriate entitlement Chiquita. A real pleasure to read too. Could not have said it better poetess.

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 8/15/2011 10:47:00 PM

A perfect piece Chiquita. I love it. Thankyou for your comments. keep on writing I need more :-)

Ingibo Benson

Date: 8/15/2011 5:52:00 PM

Wow! fine, beautiful piece. Thanks Chiamaka.

Jl Sadberry

Date: 8/15/2011 1:50:00 PM

Smile, *^_^* “Well, If Its Sin Then Never Can It Be Good Yet, If Not Then, What Words Could Define Its Possible True Beauty My Dear, Precious & Priceless, Lovely Chiquita! = I Love The Journey Outside The Confines of Ones Flesh for Many Doors Do So Open Unto Us Then &, Love, As Humanity Has Yet to Truly Ever Know == Thus, Yesss, Walk Amid The Spirit & You Shall Not Succumb Unto The Lust of Sinful Flesh!” === My Love Unto You Always, Jasper *

Johnny Sumler

Date: 8/15/2011 9:06:00 AM

Some lucky guy! Reads like a beautiful romantic voyage...lovely write indeed!