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Forbidden Cake

He found a box of brownie cake sprinkled with silver sugar flake. Ah! Hidden weekend treasure, ate with forbidden pleasure, stays bed ridden with bellyache. August 30, 2020 Limerick Fun Poetry Contest Sponsor: Tania Kitchin Syllables: 8,8,7,7,8 checked on howmanysyllables.com

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Date: 9/7/2020 1:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your brownie cake sounds wonderful. Can I have some???? OH no, no bellyache for me. A sweet write. Enjoy your win........
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Date: 9/6/2020 2:43:00 PM
Ouch! A little too delicious! Where are the antacids! Congrats and kudos my friend!
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Date: 9/6/2020 12:35:00 PM
:))) ... well done :)))
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Date: 9/6/2020 12:11:00 PM
Clever lim, Aditi, and a good warning about those forbidden pleasures in the kitchen. Congrats, my friend ~ John
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Date: 9/6/2020 8:36:00 AM
Aditi, congratulations on your winning placement with your cute limerick!
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Date: 9/6/2020 8:22:00 AM
LOL serves him right lol:-) congrats on your win Aditi :-) hugs Jan
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Date: 9/2/2020 10:22:00 AM
Very nice! A very good one Aditi!
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