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You could take me within summer desert if your eyes could meet mine and take my hand shown would be that which I cannot desert in my own grasp, toss my heart in the sand then abide by me to the glacial land watch me as I throw my soul in the snow sandy, beating heart in hand, I will stand sallow, cold soul abreast, I will bestow desolate, I desire for you to know how you ignite me, passionate as fire my luminous essence amidst the glow maybe purely adorned, they could inspire burning for you, ablaze I will remain until, evermore, you supply the rain

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Date: 5/6/2016 11:44:00 AM
SHELBY CRANDALL, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. **skat**
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Date: 4/26/2016 6:25:00 PM
shelby, Well done. Glad to read your poem today. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/18/2011 12:03:00 PM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Shelby. I am sorry for being late to welcome you to the site. I hope to be back and at full speed in the next week or so. Until then please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/15/2011 6:42:00 PM
Good sonnet with nice rhyming you have penned, Shelby
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Date: 2/15/2011 4:42:00 PM
This is a finely written sonnet. Welcome to the site. I know you will like it here.
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