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For Which I Broke My Pen's Nib

as if I got myself into a reverie whilst reminiscing our resplendent date quite thirsty you were, yearn alike to have my expounded praises as blue was the dress you wore and light caught it to praise you, I observed myself bereft of thoughts so also I felt in framing words, and in me, I found no signs of eloquence by my comments, of the fear to lose its reverence, I broke my pen’s nib for I found myself a puny character to praise a peak of esthetics but, assistance in doing so, surely somebody I’ll get

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Date: 6/12/2018 2:36:00 AM
and in me, I found no signs of eloquence Excellent
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Khan Ansur
Date: 6/12/2018 4:40:00 AM
Thank You for reading.
Date: 5/5/2017 7:32:00 AM
Interesting write Khan. I like the line about the blue dress and the light. Well done.
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Khan Ansur
Date: 5/6/2017 1:27:00 PM
Thank you Sir

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