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For They Had Deep Faith and True Loving Hearts

For They Had Deep Faith And True Loving Hearts Snow was seven feet deep, it was still falling Life was brutal and crying for frozen feet Grandfather heard echoes miles away calling He starving alone, nothing at all to eat Settler's cabin ahead was his saving grace For he knew in faith, they had good Christian souls With faith filled love for those of his redskin race True mercy, helping others their cherished goals With no memory of how he had made it His failing legs got him to that cabin door Through snowdrifts, not knowing how he had made it A miracle, he had prayed for nothing more Suddenly, safe inside, cheerfully greeted With warm food and their sincere prayers repeated Robert J. Lindley, 3-17-2017 Syllables Per Line: 11 11 11 11 0 11 11 11 11 0 11 11 11 11 0 11 11 Total # Syllables: 154 Total # Words: 111 Note: True story, as we were told by our Indian grandfather and our mother. A brief narrative written in short, sonnet form, telling of how my Indian grandfather, Julius Parks, was once saved from freezing to death in a brutally cold and massive winter storm, by a Christian family living deep in the woods.. He would finish the story by telling us, kids those people are in HEAVEN RIGHT NOW. FOR THEY HAD DEEP FAITH AND TRUE LOVING HEARTS!!!!

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Date: 3/19/2017 12:26:00 PM
An incredible poem and story Robert, always nice to hear stories like this gem:-)
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Date: 3/18/2017 11:45:00 PM
Hi Robert, a beautiful piece of poetry, as always. An excellent piece of story telling. Your words build up a wonderful canvas within the reader's mind. Once more your writing does touch this reader Robert. A seven and a fave my friend. Your Friend always....Mike.
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Date: 3/18/2017 5:32:00 AM
wow, that is an amazing story. I love how real and honest your poems are, you are a terrific storyteller my friend. Thank you for continuing to share. I don't get much time online now, but when I do, I find my way to you. A bunch of hugs. :)
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Date: 3/18/2017 12:18:00 AM
Nice story. Well penned..........//hugs
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Date: 3/17/2017 9:34:00 PM
What a wonderful story told in the sonnet form, Robert! Well done my friend. 7/7.
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Date: 3/17/2017 8:37:00 PM
Wow, Robert! So lovely!
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