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For the Haters (Part 1)

Look, I'm cool with being alone; I did it for seven years behind these walls! I am a Latin King sitting on his throne; And before you learn to walk, you gotta crawl! Once I walk out that barbed gate, Things will eventually fall into place. Love can't seem to find me 'cus I'm an inmate, But soon freedom will shine upon my face! I'm use to close-minded individuals; And people who prejudge me. They have no clue I'm a rare jewel; And no matter what they say or do, I will gain victory! See, mentally, I am built Ford tough! I will not fail, I can only succeed. My childhood was a bit rough; A child in hell, like in the papers you read. So when you prejudge me, Make sure your judgement is correct. Look deep into my individuality, But know, no one is perfect!! *The man I was yesterday, is not the man I am today! (Who are you to judge?)

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Date: 9/16/2010 10:19:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Jimmy. Hope you have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/16/2010 7:54:00 AM
As painful as jail has been, Jimmy, it has allowed you the find the man that is today, and you have left the drug addict of yesterday far behind.. it is a bright future ahead, no one but God can judge you, anyone who does puts themselves above God... Constance
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Date: 9/15/2010 8:00:00 PM
You're never alone, JAM. God has always been with you or you would not have survived. But I understand what you're saying. It's not so important to have a ton of "friends", it the quality to aim for... Much love, PB
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Date: 9/15/2010 1:45:00 PM
Great write Jimmy, I love the question at the end ;) Wilma
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Date: 9/15/2010 1:01:00 PM
You presented your thoughts very well in this poem, Jimmy. My motto is (and always has been on my blog profile) "Judge not lest ye be judged." You have overcome adversity and soon will have a chance to rebuild your life. I'm so proud to call you my friend, my brother. Love, Sis
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Date: 9/15/2010 12:35:00 PM
Awesome write Jimmy and a great expression of who u are ... confident in your self and in the power of God.. good one like Francine said .. with luv..
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Date: 9/15/2010 12:33:00 PM
good one, much enjoyed
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