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For the Fallen In Flanders Field - Original

Famished and flagging footsoldiers; formerly fitters and farmers. Facing fatigue, fitful fever, faeces and foul, foetid fungi. Fostering feelings, frustrated, for this faraway, foreign field. Forsaking fissures and furrows, forced forwards with fleetness of foot. Firearms flash and fragments fly far, feigning the firmament aflame. Fighting so fierce and ferocious, fratricide set free on this field. Fuelled by freedom, nay, falsehood; for their fellows and friends, foremost. Forays so fraught with fine failure, fatally fettered from the first. Forged by such fatuous fawners, focus firmly fixed on this field. Forfeiting furtive and fiendish, fulfilment was falsely forecast. Fate flexes her fickle fingers, future’s foretold and foreshadowed. Faustian favours forthcoming, for folly to feud for a field. Families of fine forefathers, fought fiercely, for fear we’d forget. Forthright and filial feelings, forgo fun and frivolity. Familiar flora forms focus, for the fallen in Flanders Field. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - 8 syallables on every line (www.howmanysyllables.com) November 2018 (This is my original / extended version) I wanted to do something special - and a bit different - to mark the centenary of the end of The Great War (11 November 1918). This poem is dedicated to all the brave souls lost defending freedom during that terrible conflict (and all conflicts since).

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Date: 12/8/2018 7:01:00 PM
Hello John Michaels, this poem is different about Flanders Fields. I like it. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 11/11/2018 8:32:00 AM
Awesome alliterations, John.
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John Michaels
Date: 11/14/2018 3:42:00 PM
Thanks so much, Agnes!! It was certainly a challenge to string together all those "F"s without repeating myself (and keeping within my self-imposed 8-syllables per line rule). All the best, John.
Date: 11/7/2018 3:23:00 PM
wow, a hundred years since then. And maybe today there can be found folks who recall this time as children. you did an outstanding job of honoring this time with your awesome alliteration and message.
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John Michaels
Date: 11/14/2018 3:37:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea - such a key moment in history and we owe it to them all never to forget! Apprecitate the kind comments. Regards, John.
Date: 11/7/2018 2:44:00 PM
Fabulous tribute to the fallen, this is a remarkable poem in so many ways and I love the poem in Flanders fields, :-) another fave:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/14/2018 3:36:00 PM
Thanks very much Jan - flattered that you've added it to your faves! Regards, John.
Date: 11/7/2018 1:46:00 PM
What a wonderful heartfelt tribute to those who served in the Great War! You have outdone yourself with this amazing, creative application of alliteration flowing throughout every line and stanza of this piece! I salute you, my friend - well done! Hugs. Pandita
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John Michaels
Date: 11/14/2018 3:35:00 PM
Hi Pandita. Thanks so much for your wonderful comments! Always gratefully received. Kind regards, John.
Date: 11/7/2018 1:22:00 PM
You have definitely worked hard on this poem, John!! The subject matter merits due praise, and your capable use of alliteration also merits a special mention! ~ Regards // paul
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John Michaels
Date: 11/14/2018 3:29:00 PM
Thanks for the kind comments, Paul - much appreciated! Regards, John.

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