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For the Endearing Heart

For you, my love, for you I swear I will change For you I will change With you I will change In you I will change And, happily too

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/14/2016 1:06:00 PM

Different than your usual lengthy pieces. But there is power in brevity. This is so sweet, and a beautiful moral to have. It isn't enough to change for someone else just for the sake of not severing the relationship ... you have to want it yourself, otherwise it will be artificial, and in the end ... self destructive. Your use of italics adds the needed punch.

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 3/14/2016 11:43:00 PM

Beautiful wisdom, Timothy. That is why I love your poetry and your feedback. Thank you for understanding, and appreciating the underlying meaning. ~Laura

Anthony Mark

Date: 3/12/2016 1:56:00 PM

Refreshing to read without having to light a candle, yet your power is still as pure , well done,...you are light to my dark...go read my last, ...

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 3/12/2016 7:09:00 PM

I read it, Mark. Will comment on your new poem soon. Your darkness is intriguing. Don't stop writing- you're amazing. And thank you for the feedback! ~Laura

Justin Bordner

Date: 3/12/2016 2:24:00 AM

When two souls in love change together they achieve a new nature, they become better than they ever were alone...this is what I've learned from the woman I love, this is what your poem makes me understand Laura...J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 3/12/2016 2:52:00 AM

<3 <3 I know you understand this poem Justin. We live, we love, we change and we learn. It's a beautiful, colorful metamorphosis. I confess, you have changed me in so many joyful ways! ~Laura