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For the Birds

Birds have always captured my imagination, They have such a beauty and a unique nature; Oh, what an array of birds for my inspection, I write this for the birds that fly in the azure. They have, such a beauty and a unique nature, White terns on the wing or pigeons in a park; I write this for the birds; that fly in the azure, Tiny hummingbirds and the owl in the dark. White terns on the wing, or pigeons in a park, The eagles and hawks, the swan and the duck; Tiny hummingbirds - and the owl in the dark, Dazzling fly-catchers and kingfishers that pluck. The eagles and hawks - the swan, and the duck, Woodpeckers that drum a beat or a tuneful wren; Dazzling, fly-catchers and kingfishers that pluck, Beauty in the wild, city; or in a green forest glen. Woodpeckers, that drum a beat or a tuneful wren, Oh what an array! Of birds for my inspection; Beauty - in the wild, city or in a green forest glen, Birds have always captured, my imagination. _______________________ October 22, 2015 Pantoum Submitted to the contest, For The Birds, sponsor, Anthony Slausen Sixth Place

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Date: 11/24/2015 3:52:00 AM
Broken, Congratulations on your wonderful win. LUV **SKAT**
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Constance La France
Date: 11/24/2015 5:43:00 PM
Skat, thanks for the congratulations on the wonderful ~
Date: 11/22/2015 10:56:00 PM
Congrats on ur wonderful winning work broken!
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Constance La France
Date: 11/23/2015 7:41:00 AM
Thanks Upma for visiting and for the congrats ~
Date: 11/22/2015 4:58:00 PM
Broken Wings, congratulations on your fine win! Love how you paid tribute to so many of our lovely feathered friends. Hugs, Sandra
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Constance La France
Date: 11/23/2015 7:42:00 AM
Sandra, thanks so much dear heart for visiting my poetry and for the congratulations, I do love my birds !!!
Date: 11/22/2015 4:29:00 PM
Beautiful pantoum Broken Wings congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 11/23/2015 7:43:00 AM
Jan, thanks for the beautiful and the congrats ~
Date: 11/22/2015 3:36:00 PM
AH!!!! the dreaded Pantoum......the last place I would have expected to find the birds roosting....congrats on the win.
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Constance La France
Date: 11/23/2015 7:44:00 AM
John, your comment was so funny, I could not help but laugh and thanks for the congrats ~
Date: 10/23/2015 8:22:00 AM
Very nice Broken Wings. Nice entry for the contest. Love birds.
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Constance La France
Date: 11/23/2015 7:45:00 AM
Thanks for visiting, Michael and for the comment ~
Date: 10/22/2015 10:55:00 PM
Very nice, Constance. Excellent imagery and expression and sensitivity.
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Constance La France
Date: 11/23/2015 7:46:00 AM
Thomas, thank you for that "nice" comment `
Date: 10/22/2015 8:57:00 PM
An interesting form I need to pay more attention to.A well developed poem that soars..like your birds...good luck in the contest
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Constance La France
Date: 11/23/2015 7:47:00 AM
Frederic, thank you so much for visiting my poetry, appreciate and thanks for the "soar" ~
Date: 10/22/2015 5:19:00 PM
Oh the Birds in sky high!!! Wonderful piece, BW! You are so talented..... PS: you are mentioned in my latest post 'On PoetrySoup' take time to check it out
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Constance La France
Date: 11/23/2015 7:48:00 AM
Wilfred, thanks so much for visiting my poetry and mentioning me in yours, appreciate ~
Date: 10/22/2015 4:47:00 PM
How appropriate that you'd write something so well...given your name. Well done, BW! I'm not familiar with the Pantoun.. but I'll give it a shot one of the days.
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Constance La France
Date: 11/23/2015 7:49:00 AM
Hi Lin, thanks for visiting and that lovely comment, Pantoum is not as hard as it looks, give it a whirl ~
Date: 10/22/2015 4:36:00 PM
Anexcellent Pantoun... which is not an easy feat!!
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Constance La France
Date: 11/23/2015 7:50:00 AM
Terry thanks for visiting and for the "excellent" appreciate ~

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