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For Sale Sign Came Down

My blue Monday occurred 30 years ago I being due to get wed a second time But had to sell my house before that time was running out for my last dime It had been on sale for a good month plenty viewers but no offers to see had chat with agents to change price this was Friday glad they did agree When it came Sunday afternoon sitting at home really feeling blue my fiancee getting stressed also too then a knock at my door gave a clue Outside the door was a young lady was passing by saw the house for sale asked if she could view my place said liked it and like to nail Monday morn came, off to work I go receive call surveyor was on his way by lunch, call came to confirm ecstasy was mine receive my blue Monday "For sale sign came down" (I want to tell you about my Blue Monday, but not like most folk this wasn't sad but a very extremely happy blue Monday.)

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Date: 7/29/2020 3:45:00 PM
A bit of good luck never goes amiss, Gordon! According to Milton "They also serve who only stand and wait." Regards // paul
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 7/30/2020 4:13:00 AM
Thanks Paul , glad you liked it, have a nice day and take care, Blessings always,Gordon
Date: 7/15/2020 4:25:00 AM
A great poem about your selling experience, Gordon:)
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Date: 7/15/2020 6:33:00 AM
Hi Jo, Glad you enjoyed it and trust all's well with you, keep safe and well, Blessings,Gordon
Date: 7/15/2020 3:19:00 AM
Hi Gordon just seen you are online like me, so thought I would check your poetry. So glad I did as I loved your tale of Blue Monday when the sign came down. Such a good read my friend, always stressful when trying to sell. Glad you are both okay and keeping well. I am off to Lynmouth in Devon quite soon for a break with my good friends, so excited at the prospect of a change of scenery. Keep safe dear Gordon, with kindest thoughts from Ann xx
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Date: 7/15/2020 6:43:00 AM
Hi Ann, Sorry I missed you online this morning, I just came off when you sent your comment glad you enjoyed my piece. Hope you're doing ok and have a great time in Devon, it's a lovely area though never been myself. We went down Clyde coast yesterday , nice to walk along the waterfront for a change first time for 4 months. Blessings always and keep safe, Gordon xx
Date: 7/14/2020 8:00:00 PM
A delightful telling of a heartwarming tale, dear Gordon. I bet it seems just last month, not 30 years ago. Where does time go? Enjoyed the read, hope all is well ~ John
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 7/15/2020 3:00:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed it, John, yes time seems to fly as Christine and I was saying last night speaking about the present crisis this year has just gone by. We are well here, the hairdressers open today but think I'll wait till next week till queue quietens down. trustrt family is all well, Blessings, Gordon
Date: 7/14/2020 12:36:00 PM
Glad good news came at the eleventh hour Gordon, we all deserve a bit of good luck. Tom
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 7/14/2020 1:14:00 PM
Hi Tom , Glad you liked it and trust you are well, Blessings always,Gordon
Date: 7/14/2020 10:37:00 AM
This is so good, to here, This is soo brilliant, our Creator! Good for you, friend.
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Date: 7/14/2020 11:30:00 AM
Thanks James, Glad you enjoyed it and thought it brilliant but don't understand what you mean by ' our creator'? Take care, Gordon

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