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For Paul I heard the siren loud and shrill And down my back there cruised a chill A gas explosion, down the mine Had blocked the shaft at number nine. Twelve miners trapped beneath the ground But one was dead when they were found My brother Paul, of sixteen years My mother’s face awash with tears. Just like a babe she bathed her son Her little boy whose life was gone My chest so tight...my throat so dry A pain so deep I could not cry Years pass,but still there are times just before sleep When I remember...and weep. An original poem on the theme of --- Funeral/ Death Margaret Foster Part truth / part fiction. 22/5/10

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Date: 10/1/2014 4:49:00 PM
An awful story so sorry! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 10/1/2014 10:38:00 AM
I am sorry for your loss. Congratulations on winning with this touching very well written piece.
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Date: 10/1/2014 10:32:00 AM
This is so sad and heart wrenching. I can see your mother there with her heart breaking, and I feel so sad for her. Congratulations on your win Margaret.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/1/2014 10:34:00 AM
PS, my mothers name is Margaret and my brothers name is Paul.
Date: 10/1/2014 6:40:00 AM
Margaret , I loved this poem a lot. It is not only very earnest, expressed from the heart and a very fine work,, but also very well edited. Many congrats on a wonderful win.. huggs
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Margaret Foster
Date: 10/1/2014 8:39:00 AM
Thank you Gautami for these kind words they are much appreciated.
Date: 6/1/2010 10:00:00 PM
Margaret, I'm at a loss for words - I have lived through many tragic deaths and been with those I love as they tragically lost their lives - This poem is heartbreakingly beautiful, Congratulations on placing in the contest, YF4L, God Bless, mj
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Date: 6/1/2010 11:45:00 AM
Congrats Margaret on your winning poem in the Whats My Theme contest .. enother great win this week.. for an awesome write.. luv.. Linda-Marie.
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Date: 5/21/2010 8:17:00 PM
Emotions recollected effectively. Good Luck in the contest
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