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For Oblivion

(Inspired by Joe Bonamassa's "Midnight Hours") Oh, how I hate when sunlight has fled, Misery visits as I lie in bed. I simply can’t sleep. I just feel so bad. By midnight’s hour I’m sadder than sad. The clock keeps on ticking and louder it seems as I keep wishing to fall into dreams Chorus: Thoughts of you swirling and swirling around. Where can the sweetness of comfort be found? I need to forget you. I’m coming undone. I beg and I beg for Oblivion. Oh to just dream this sadness away. Instead with moroseness the whole night I stay. If I could only get some shut-eye. I’m feeling so blue I just want to die. This dirge in the darkness keeps coming to me. Please let me escape my reality. Chorus: Thoughts of you swirling and swirling around. Where can the sweetness of comfort be found? I need to forget you. I’m coming undone. I beg and I beg for Oblivion. Oblivion take me, take me away. Oh, for oblivion each night I pray (repeat last two lines till end of song) May 18, 2023 For Joe Bonamassa Inspiration 5 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Robert James Liguori

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Date: 5/21/2023 6:03:00 PM
what a lyricist you are Andrea...this is really terrific :)
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Date: 5/19/2023 1:06:00 AM
Lovely lyric. Difficult to forget someone you loved.
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Date: 5/18/2023 4:02:00 PM
I don't know him, like Ilene said, but you do write great lyrics! Good luck in contest!
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Date: 5/18/2023 1:19:00 PM
I don’t know Joe Bonamassa but I love your lyrics, Andrea! This would make a wonderful song…
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/18/2023 3:34:00 PM
Thanks so much. I wrote around 5 songs recently based on blues inspiration and this and my last one are my personal favorites. If only I knew how to write tunes!!
Date: 5/18/2023 11:17:00 AM
I like these lyrics Andrea, I can just picture some heavy metal band belting out the cords and lyrics, (Metallica) are brilliant at bringing insanity into their songs, my type of poem, cheers David, hey captcha 4am!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/18/2023 3:34:00 PM
Thanks
Date: 5/18/2023 10:20:00 AM
Deep poem! I'm not familiar with this man, but I'm sure you've done him justice.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/18/2023 3:35:00 PM
I never heard of him until recently!

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