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For My Boy: Heads and Tails

For you, my vow For you, my joy, For you, my worry, For you, my boy. For you, my bow For you, my cry. From you, my boon My boon- your joy.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/1/2012 6:16:00 AM
That's got a real nice flow to it, you've worked with the restriction and used repetition really well, nice piece, enjoyed. Congrats on the win.
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Date: 2/1/2012 2:50:00 AM
A great poem Sadaf.Congrats on your win.
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Date: 1/31/2012 1:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your super win today in "Nikko's" contest Sadaf. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/31/2012 11:32:00 AM
I really found this to be very touching, Sadaf! You really brought your love for your son across here-- super duper congrats on your beautiful and meaningful write :D!
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Date: 1/31/2012 10:47:00 AM
Good one like it congratulations x
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Date: 1/15/2012 7:17:00 AM
Good one.Best wishes.
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