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For love cannot walk away

For love cannot walk away From a searing pain Scathing its senses Nor flee the distress Of fractured tears Dried at their origin Thus, does it hide Within a bit of humor A silly dance A chided rebuke Of memory’s kisses For love cannot walk away For it is love Not a sappy swoon Destined to wither In the heat of passions angst Nor a butterfly Afloat on wind-blown wings It will at times shriek loudly Into the raging darkness Of billowing despair Weep softly in the absence Of a failing presence Curse in angered arrogance its fate of loving And yet it will endure For love cannot walk away

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Date: 4/4/2024 11:37:00 PM
The strength of love is explicitly told in this poem. It is a romantic tale. Thanks for writing it.
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Date: 4/4/2024 5:49:00 PM
You dealt with the complexities of love with such wonderful imagery. I felt 'the soaring pain,' and 'the fractured tears' Those images spoke to me. Yet love despite the pain that sometimes comes with it endures as your indicated in your last few lines. Well done. Have a great evening, Sara
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Date: 4/4/2024 5:41:00 PM
Dear John, What a poignant exploration of the complexities and resilience of love. The imagery you employ conveys the emotional turmoil and depth inherent in loving someone deeply. From searing pain to fractured tears, you encapsulate the spectrum of love's experiences with striking clarity. I loved your affirmation of love's endurance, even in the face of despair and anger, is both powerful and comforting. This is a profound reflection on the nature of love.- Blessings, Daniel
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