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For Love

Like a song I wait to be sang, to be cherished, To be loved for who I am, not what I look like or what people have said One who will be kept and loved not tossed back on the shelf No worry, because I know now you will always love me yourself, They say true lover's eyes touches the deepest darkest parts of your hearts, but For your eyes it melts my very soul if you would stare that much, You'd make me quiver down my veins with every single blink.. Along with your angelic smile and lips that tastes so sweet, You send me thund'ring rush of blood that sweeps me off my feet.. Now if I stand so close and watch how handsome you are, behold, I would not last without surrend'ring to your kiss.. If I indulge myself too long You'd take me to a dance, and let the heavens paint the perfect art of romance

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Date: 3/19/2016 2:58:00 PM
- Thank you for your first lovely poem, Sadat :) - I welcome you to Poetry Soup :) - Hope you will find our "soup" friendly and fun - Good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/29/2016 3:36:00 PM
Gracias anne..I appreciate the love TBT soup is one place I feel at home already..#winkwink
Date: 3/19/2016 12:42:00 AM
Sadat, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 3/29/2016 3:41:00 PM
Thanks lots *skats ..lookin foward to have your smiles keep rolling for I come with several poems to share..I dont mind having a long know each other talk..so you a poet too??
Date: 3/18/2016 11:36:00 PM
Wonderful first poem, Sadat, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 3/29/2016 3:44:00 PM
Thanx alot *linda..looking foward to read yours..I highly feel home already. .with all this love my poetry dream wil get bigger and bigger..*hugs #winkwink

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