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For Debbie

It has been a good day, a fine day. We splashed in the surf. We talked about things. We smiled at a child building walls against the tide. But years have passed And we have become friends. Now, I crave shy beginnings: A fluttering heart, An unfamiliar scent, The feel of unknown skin. I am so young to be so old. And now that another beckons, Dare I deceive And break your heart To be young again For a little while?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/25/2016 12:29:00 AM
lovely write and dedication... LINDA
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Date: 5/17/2014 2:20:00 AM
Ben, This is such a beautiful honest piece, intrinsic poet that you are. You display feelings like a rose displays colors, brilliant and bright!
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Date: 5/16/2014 8:33:00 PM
So lovely, sweet and charming piece. What a delight to be able to enjoy this beauty! I really Like!!.
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Date: 5/15/2014 8:43:00 AM
I think this is such a special and enchanting piece.
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Date: 5/13/2014 5:29:00 PM
Beautiful write as always. Ten stars my friend. Love and Peace, Deborah
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Date: 5/13/2014 5:27:00 PM
Hi Sam, Haven't seen you hope you are OK and that maybe Your working on new masterpieces behind this site... Stay well my friend. Love and Peace, Deborah
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Date: 5/10/2014 7:46:00 PM
You only live once, so why not take a chance? I really enjoyed this beautiful poem. A very nice write, Sam!
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Date: 5/10/2014 6:00:00 PM
- You are never too old ..... Everyone needs a "Debbie" sometimes! - Lovely poem Sam! - Have a enjoyable weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/10/2014 9:34:00 AM
Debbie must be wonderful... this is a awesome poem.. as usual .. you never disappoint me. hugs Brooke
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Date: 5/10/2014 9:36:00 AM
Trust me, Brooke, she is! Thanks ever so for stopping by. Luv & Hugs;) Ben

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