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For a Moment

In that moment Every little thing froze. Only your movement was apparent Nothing made sense, But just for a moment. What then is natural, If what i feel is not. I would like you to understand that, Only even for a moment. I do not want then, no, You to stay long, Here with me Only for a moment, Just for the moment

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Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 9/18/2013 10:49:00 AM

Beautiful poem Marion! It is often strong emotions that we want to hold on to even if just for a moment. You've brought out the theme very well - your words flow smoothly making the poem a pleasure to read. Very well done!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/5/2013 9:03:00 AM

Good morning Marion. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your writing pen is looking for. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Stop by anytime you like. I’m looking forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy this community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/30/2013 1:48:00 AM

Marion, a enjoyable poem to read. - Welcome to P-Soup-Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your poems here with us. - Have fun with poetry! - Welcome to read some of my poems. - Have a nice week. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)