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Footprints On My Heart

if galaxies were only made to be mine, I’d give you the universe in its entirety. last night stardust fell upon our eyes and constellations called our names- we sat under the magenta solstice moonlight and pleaded for the night to never end...for you are my revelation. I ache for your touch- for it outweighs any fallacy I may encounter in my life. you long for my eyes- for you see a whole new word of love and passion through them. if you want tears, I’d give you an ocean- if you need light, I’d rope the sun. for there is no hourglass of time that can contain our endless tenderness- only grains of footprints left on my heart. August 15, 2018

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Date: 1/1/2019 1:08:00 PM
Lovely, Lu Loo. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 12/25/2018 4:30:00 AM
This romantic write takes my breath away, Lu. How wonderful it is to feel truly loved. Congratulations on your win in Mark's contest and have a Merry Christmas, Carolyn
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Date: 12/24/2018 11:51:00 AM
Congrats Lu Loo on your win!
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Date: 12/24/2018 11:35:00 AM
Romance personified Lu Loo, bravo
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Date: 12/24/2018 11:26:00 AM
Lu Loo, congrats on your win on Mile 2 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon contest. This is a lovely and dear poem. I love the fourth stanza. A Fav for me. ~Mark
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Date: 12/24/2018 10:22:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win! Janice
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Date: 8/18/2018 11:01:00 AM
Simply beautiful! Congratulations on your #1 win.
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Date: 8/17/2018 4:44:00 PM
Lovely, Laura. Congrats on your top win.
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Date: 8/15/2018 8:08:00 PM
A poetic masterpiece as far as I can read. It brings the reader to new heights.
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Date: 8/15/2018 7:28:00 PM
Beautifully crafted Laura...the Galaxies align...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 8/15/2018 3:31:00 PM
This was absolutely gorgeous. An enchanting and heart touching piece of writing that just makes one feel good inside.
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Date: 8/15/2018 2:28:00 PM
A touching tale of true love Laura. Sublime.
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