Footprints In the Leaves Revised

Running though the crackling leaves, no footprints are to be seen, but her laughter could  be heard all round.   She passes a deer with lovely doe eyes, when suddenly  a hand stretches out and grabs her. Her heart misses a beat then whispers ."Why are you here?" " Is this where I live my fantasy?" He nods, not saying a word  slowly and gently he lies her iin the leaves. She soon realises that heaven was here on earth. Panting with love she clutches the leaves as paradise is found ....... With smoking eyes, he kisses her goodbye.......Paradise lost. The leaves no longer make her soul happy. Sighs, turns  the car's key and heads home The forest floor a bed of crushed leaves ... the sound of laughter