Footprints

To live in violence Subdued in an ancient land Footprints heading west contest.. Haiku in Probabilities 7/22/14

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Date: 3/6/2015 12:02:00 AM

soupmail!!

Date: 8/11/2014 8:35:00 AM

Thoughtful deep haiku Frederic! Congrats on fine win. Shud hv placed Much higher in my view!

Date: 8/8/2014 10:12:00 PM

Nice pen picture, Frederic. congrats

Date: 8/8/2014 8:10:00 PM

ONe that really makes me think. Head west , young man, comes to my mind!!!

Date: 8/8/2014 6:50:00 PM

excellent haiku Frederic congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx

Date: 7/24/2014 8:19:00 PM

Awesome haiku, dear Frederic!... The overtaking of a people in 3 lines.. Superb my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene

Date: 7/24/2014 3:24:00 PM

Well done, Frederic! I think this one is better than all the ones I wrote. Mine are too straight forward; yours is deeper. // paul

Date: 7/22/2014 3:56:00 PM

deeply scribed as your images capture the theme's mood.. peace is what we need ;swell job, frederick!. huggs

Date: 7/22/2014 2:21:00 PM

Or heading north, across the border. As usual you don't disappoint.. Good one.! BG