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Footprints

There is a sense of trespass on this frost enameled morning as I leave my footprints graffitied across the white grass, sending the noise of every step to crunch my presence into a wide, frozen silence. I stop, marooned in the middle of a crystalline surround that seems so brittle that if I take one more step I will cause this fragile world to shatter. It is so delicate, exquisitely beautiful balanced on the edge of melt. Even my taken breath seems to send a threatening shudder through its chambers. It would be good to stay here, to be taken out of time and become part of what is distilled just below the quiet of this blessed freeze. But the sun now is coming through the trees casting its rays across the crusted ice. A thin, steamy mist is rising. This lovely world is beginning to melt and another is getting ready to emerge. Birdwings brush the air. My footprints are dissolving into grass.

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Date: 5/17/2024 6:13:00 AM
Love this. Fave. So many beautiful mysteries in this poem. How to pick one? I like the concept of 'out of time...just below the quiet'. And the ending makes me want to get up very early just to see this. J :)
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/18/2024 2:10:00 AM
So pleased Jeanette to receive such generous comments...has made my day. Learning that a poem has managed to convey something meaningful is so reassuring and rewarding. I thank you sincerely...take care, Paul
Date: 5/12/2024 7:52:00 PM
Your descriptions are so moving even as they both so precise and yet so poetic. A pleasure to read the verse of a real craftsman, Paul! Thanks, Gershon
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/13/2024 5:12:00 PM
So grateful for your comments Gershon....to receive such positive endorsement is an honor....I thank you sincerely my friend and fellow craftsman. Paul
Date: 5/10/2024 3:50:00 PM
"birdwings brush the air".....that single phrase had me signing wistfully in a peaceful ...relax. Beautifully done Paul
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/11/2024 12:09:00 AM
Good to hear that the poem sent you its relaxing vibrations...thankyou for giving it your time my friend. Always good to hesr from you.
Date: 5/10/2024 3:32:00 PM
You've beautifully captured the morning with its delicate cold, crisp air. Your words made me want to linger there in the quietness and peace. Yet the sun slowly takes away the morning magic and releases the reader into the beauty of a new day. I've said it before, and I'll say it again. You style of writing makes for an easy read, like easy rock with a subtle ending that leaves a punch. Faving. Enjoy your evening, Sara
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/11/2024 12:02:00 AM
Always a plessure to learn that my style finds a sympathetic ear. Your comments are savoured my dear friend...feasted on with sincere gratitude. You do me an honor by anointing this little piece with a fav. stamp. Do hope the day comes with its gifts...take care.
Date: 5/10/2024 3:27:00 PM
There once again with you Paul! A cold morning in Melbourne? Another wonderful “Paul” poem! Debx
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/10/2024 11:58:00 PM
Dearest fellow Aussie....honored to have you by my side on my walk. Coat and scarf weather approaching I'm afraid. Thankyou again Deb.
Date: 5/10/2024 11:09:00 AM
Hello Paul Willason, This is a beautiful poem. I enjoyed to read. I am m a,king it my fav. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/11/2024 9:57:00 AM
Hello Paul Williams, Hi! i hope you are having a nice weekend. Your welcome Paul. Paul it is a wonderful poem. I enjoyed to read. Have a wonderful weekend. /Darlene/
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/10/2024 11:53:00 PM
Thankyou Darlene for your visit, your poisitive comments and giving the poem a fav. status...feel honored. Take care, Paul
Date: 5/10/2024 9:23:00 AM
Hello Paul, You have wonderfully captured the delicate dance between presence and absence and the weight of our impact on nature's fragile beauty. I loved how your imagery unfolds like a delicate symphony, each step echoing in the frozen silence, leaving g behind a trail of temporary existence. Yet, amidst the transient nature of our imprint, there's a longing to merge with the timeless essence of the surroundings. I believe there is a profound connection between human presence and the ever-changing natural world. - Blessings, Daniel
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/10/2024 11:50:00 PM
Wow !. So thankful for your thoughtful and inspired comments my friend...you have a way to inside of a poem. Can almost feel your footsteps tread the territory. Thankyou Daniel, once again.
Date: 5/10/2024 6:51:00 AM
Your words are a tonic Paul. You paint such exquisite pictures that it's takes my breath away. Your poems unlock memories and describe what seemed impossible to put into words. You are magical, there's no other explanation.
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/10/2024 11:47:00 PM
So pleased to hear from you DD...providing such positive comments. Your encouragement, from the start, has always helped me along the journey. You are valued my dear friend.

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