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Footles Rattle 1

Footles Rattle

Far sky
So high
Hot sun
Not fun.
High price
New rise.
Top prize
Hopes rise.
New ring 
News bring.
Don’t miss
Fond kiss.
Too shy
No try.

S.Jagathsimhan Nair
23rd jan 13

For Yasmin's 'Footle fun' contest

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  1. Date: 10/24/2014 11:18:00 AM
    This is such a clever write! I love it! I can see why you won with this witty piece! BRAVO! Pandita

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 5:53:00 AM
    Congrats on a great top win, Jag!

  1. Date: 2/10/2013 7:41:00 AM
    Congrats on your grand win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 9:49:00 PM
    nice one! congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 8:59:00 PM
    I love them Jag,, fun footles... congrats on your first place win.... very creative... LINDA

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 6:39:00 PM
    Congrats on your fabulous 1st place win, Jag! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 6:14:00 PM
    Congrats on your 1st place win Jag xxx

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 3:50:00 PM

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 3:07:00 PM
    Clever and VERY funny 'Footles Rattle'...Congratulations - Tim

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 12:11:00 PM
    Congrats on your win !!

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 11:35:00 AM
    Congrad's on your fun win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 10:53:00 AM
    awesome win, jag,and I had not even seen this yet!! Congratulations.

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 10:32:00 AM
    Congratulations on your first place in the contest,Jag. - Bravo! - Wishing you a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 9:38:00 AM
    Congratulations my dear friend SJ on your awesome win. I’ve truly enjoyed reading your poem. Thank you so much! Love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 8:00:00 AM
    Hi jag these are great congratulations well worth top spot xx

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 7:57:00 AM
    well doneJag....,Seren

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 8:28:00 AM
    I am glad you Tryed this poem. I am not familiar with the form but it is entertaining. Thanks for your visit and comment.

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 2:47:00 PM
    lol, love these footles - congrats on your wins, my friend

  1. Date: 1/25/2013 5:03:00 AM
    Lovely poem!

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 2:56:00 AM
    A fun poem form footle and you've created a lovely poem,Jag. - Luck in contes. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)