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Footles Rattle 1

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Footles Rattle 1

Footles Rattle

Far sky
So high
Hot sun
Not fun.
Naughty 
Haughty.
High price
New rise.
Top prize
Hopes rise.
Strong-willed
Long-grilled.
New ring 
News bring.
Don’t miss
Fond kiss.
Too shy
No try.

S.Jagathsimhan Nair
23rd jan 13

For Yasmin's 'Footle fun' contest

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  1. Date: 10/24/2014 11:18:00 AM
    This is such a clever write! I love it! I can see why you won with this witty piece! BRAVO! Pandita

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 5:53:00 AM
    Congrats on a great top win, Jag!

  1. Date: 2/10/2013 7:41:00 AM
    Congrats on your grand win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 9:49:00 PM
    nice one! congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 8:59:00 PM
    I love them Jag,, fun footles... congrats on your first place win.... very creative... LINDA

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 6:39:00 PM
    Congrats on your fabulous 1st place win, Jag! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 6:14:00 PM
    Congrats on your 1st place win Jag xxx

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 3:50:00 PM
    congrads

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 3:07:00 PM
    Clever and VERY funny 'Footles Rattle'...Congratulations - Tim

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 12:11:00 PM
    Congrats on your win !!

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 11:35:00 AM
    Congrad's on your fun win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 10:53:00 AM
    awesome win, jag,and I had not even seen this yet!! Congratulations.

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 10:32:00 AM
    Congratulations on your first place in the contest,Jag. - Bravo! - Wishing you a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 9:38:00 AM
    Congratulations my dear friend SJ on your awesome win. I’ve truly enjoyed reading your poem. Thank you so much! Love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 8:00:00 AM
    Hi jag these are great congratulations well worth top spot xx

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 7:57:00 AM
    well doneJag....,Seren

  1. Date: 1/27/2013 8:28:00 AM
    I am glad you Tryed this poem. I am not familiar with the form but it is entertaining. Thanks for your visit and comment.

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 2:47:00 PM
    lol, love these footles - congrats on your wins, my friend

  1. Date: 1/25/2013 5:03:00 AM
    Lovely poem!

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 2:56:00 AM
    A fun poem form footle and you've created a lovely poem,Jag. - Luck in contes. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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