Footles for the Birds

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For Brian Strand's 'No 1299' Poetry Contest

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Let the Fowls Go Release three geese Fowl Abuse I struck my duck Jokester Duck Chuckling Duckling Crazy Bird Resort The loon Lagoon Bird Mystery Novel Who slew Cuckoo? The Welcomed Garden Bird Again . . . the wren! Did you get enough to Drink? Say when, Gray wren Most Revered Ones Pharaoh’s Sparrows Bird Gazette Headline Blind Larks find parks Bird Acquaintances She knows three crows

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Robert Schatz

Date: 4/9/2024 8:05:00 PM

Pharoah's sparrows. Both must be proud.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 4/9/2024 7:13:00 PM

Andrea, so cute and creative.

Ink Empress

Date: 4/9/2024 10:56:00 AM

She knows three crows hahah, I struck my duck haha. Gosh you are just beyond intelligent in how you write these footles! Queen you definitely are of these and i think many will agree with me sweet andrea! Youv nailed it and its never a boring one from you, i hope this will score high too! Best wishes for the contest! Sending you light always

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 4/9/2024 9:35:00 AM

Dear Andrea, What a delightful journey through the world of avian imagery, offering a whimsical exploration of birds and their interactions. Each stanza invites readers to ponder the mysteries of nature and the playful dynamics of bird behavior. I loved the repetition of certain phrases adds a rhythmic quality, enhancing the overall flow of the poem. It's a charming piece that leaves a lasting impression. - Blessings, Daniel

Jeanette Brewin

Date: 4/9/2024 12:17:00 AM

Well done! A good poem, Andrea.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/8/2024 11:54:00 PM

You're on a roll with these Andrea, best of luck in the contest. Tom

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/8/2024 8:38:00 PM

Wow! Andrea, What a well written string of footless. You are so good at these! I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Have a wonderful evening-Alexis