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Footle .. Footle !!

Sublime Short rhyme .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/10/2010 2:29:00 PM
Yes, this is a footle for sure. I have noticed something, Sean, you are usually rhyming only the second syllable. Gosh, that means the possibilities are ENDLESS because so far, I have been rhyming both syllables. I think I need to get my second set ready to post!! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/9/2009 12:13:00 AM
Thanks for your always witty welcome comments.Rgds Brian I see you are to vote again in October...it reminds me of schooldays when you could not leave the table until you had eaten your greens ,as they were good for you !
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Date: 6/29/2009 11:12:00 AM
You know where your mastery stand ... I am in your shade, my friend. One love
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Date: 5/19/2009 12:33:00 PM
Missing your creative footles Sean. I hope you will be posting more soon. They truly are day brighteners. Thank you for taking time to comment on my poem. Have a wonderful day! Karen
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Date: 5/9/2009 4:04:00 AM
Remark. So smart... Rejoice! Heart sings... Great find. Short rhymes... Hail Thee. Word King... I heard. Your words... So sweet. Your treat... Much fun. Must run... Great Day. I say... Laughing!!!! Thank you Sean Kelly. You reign! Love, Dane.
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Date: 4/25/2009 11:03:00 AM
So much truth about these short quips. I'm waiting for you to post some new ones as you have a wonderful sense of humor that brightens my day. Thank you for your kind comment. Have a wonderful weekend! Karen
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Date: 4/19/2009 12:18:00 PM
Keep it going!!! You've got it!
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Date: 3/31/2009 12:39:00 PM
Short is sweet!! So is this treat (poem)! ~ love, Carrie (ps..thanks for the cyber-virus warning...lets hope we steer clear)!!
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Date: 3/19/2009 8:23:00 PM
sweet time ,,no crime,, a wonderful and seet footle that shows your imagination and stylistic talent,,,Thank you for reading and leaving your words behind upon mine,,,blessings..Cecil
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Date: 3/19/2009 5:11:00 AM
Dear Sean, Superbly Written I just finished reading YOUR Comment on Kristin's Great POEM "Don't Burn the Day" Thank-YOU for YOUR Footle response to My "Lost LOVE" Footle I shall read more of YOU as time Permits ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 3/16/2009 12:17:00 PM
You are the footle master. Thanks for allowing me to smile with this one and for your kind comments. Have a good day! Karen
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Date: 3/6/2009 11:21:00 AM
I agree with Donna, "Keep 'em coming." Love your gift with humor. Enjoyed your lightheated response to my poem. You are a day brightener. Now, write some more poetry for us to enjoy!!!!!! Karen
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Date: 3/1/2009 2:56:00 AM
True words Sean, nice footle...Raul
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Date: 2/18/2009 8:37:00 AM
Sean, I see the very essence of this footle here! Love it! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 2/12/2009 8:00:00 PM
Yes, indeed! I love these things! Keep 'em coming, Sean! Donna
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Date: 2/12/2009 6:37:00 AM
You are a star... Rock on my footle-minded friend, love, me
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Date: 2/11/2009 2:21:00 PM
Hey, all the good responses were taken.! Ill just say..well done. I cant wait to see what youll come up with next. BG
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Date: 2/11/2009 12:46:00 PM
So fine, you rhyme. A man, who can. Well done! Love, Shar
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Date: 2/11/2009 12:07:00 PM
And now......I bow! :) Sunny days.....flags raise!!! QR
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Date: 2/11/2009 7:41:00 AM
I like ! So.... into my favourites it must go.Rgds Brian & thanks for your always welcome comments
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Date: 2/11/2009 7:19:00 AM
Hi Sean - very true words that i reckon I must agree with - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/11/2009 5:33:00 AM
prepare.....to share..... small thought....just brought Too short....Abort Gone past.....too fast few words.....absurd Déirdre
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Date: 2/11/2009 4:11:00 AM
hi sean, thanks for your comment. i checked out some of your work and feedbacks. i guess... Sean A poet born
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Date: 2/11/2009 3:42:00 AM
Mr. Kelly you do carry on so. Yes my dear, short and sweet you rhymed complete, smilesss Laurie
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Date: 2/11/2009 3:36:00 AM
absolutely right!! bravo... kello... it hard to comment like you!! ~ Arany
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