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Footle-Wind Poems

Wind chimes, Soft rhymes. * for Brian's Contest

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 4/11/2009 4:48:00 PM

I like this one. And I liek windchimes, too. Congratulations on placing in Brian Strand's April Footle contest contest.

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 3/24/2009 8:03:00 PM

By far the best footle I've read. Beautiful work on this one.

Tyler Martin

Date: 3/23/2009 11:19:00 PM

This one speaks volumes. You wrote a great poem in the footle form with this one. Tyler

Abe Lopez

Date: 3/23/2009 3:57:00 PM

Nice footle, I love the way the wind uses chimes as an instrument to make its' voice heard.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/22/2009 6:52:00 PM

Dear Raul, Congratulations on YOUR Honorable Mention in Brian's April Footle Contest ALWAYS...HG

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/18/2009 3:48:00 PM

Great footle, Raul! Love it! Carolyn

Sean Kelly

Date: 3/16/2009 3:03:00 AM

Well done , Raul ... Great piece ...

Laurie Ginn

Date: 3/15/2009 6:22:00 PM

Oh I loved this the first time I saw it. Nice job Raul congrats

Lena Townsend

Date: 3/15/2009 6:05:00 PM

Oh, and congratulations on your win! LOL Smiles and chuckles from Lolita

Lena Townsend

Date: 3/15/2009 6:04:00 PM

Oh, I love wind chimes! They play so many beautiful songs! Smiles from Lolita

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/15/2009 5:46:00 PM

Sigh..I love wind chimes..conrats on your win Raul..well deserved. BG

Robin L. Gass

Date: 3/15/2009 3:45:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Brians contest, Raul! Love, Robin

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/15/2009 1:16:00 PM

Warmest congrats Raul on your well deserved win in Brian's contest! Love, Shar

Date: 3/15/2009 1:12:00 PM

Love this the first time I read it. Congratulations on being one of the winners in the footle contest. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/15/2009 11:40:00 AM

Loved this one...a well deserving a win in the contest! ~Congratulatons, Raul! ~ love, Carrie

Amy Swanson

Date: 3/15/2009 10:52:00 AM

Beautiful footle, so pretty and soft-sounding. :) Congrats on your win in Mr. Strand's footle contest! :) Love, Amy

Brian Strand

Date: 3/15/2009 10:18:00 AM

Congrats on your success in my footle contest Raul.Rgds Brian

Daniel Neal

Date: 3/12/2009 2:42:00 PM

Soft rhymes, a little masterpiece indeed. DN

Robin L. Gass

Date: 3/9/2009 1:31:00 PM

Beautiful image with this one, Raul. A wonderful coice for Brians contest! Good luck! Love, Robin

Belinda Parish

Date: 3/8/2009 9:48:00 PM

I love wind chimes and this little footle.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/8/2009 2:24:00 PM

Dear Raul, Of Your last 3 posts all Footles this is best for Brian's Contest I'm sorry i have not commented to YOU lately Had a lot of catching up to do Have YOU read Barbara Gorelick's Footle "Learning to Ride" It's a series of Footles Could be a run for first place GOOD LUCK LOVEYOUr POETIC TALENT...HG

Date: 3/8/2009 8:53:00 AM

I really like the whimsical feel of this poem. Nice way to incorporate nature and writing. Enjoyed it. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for the kind words on my poem. Have a nice day. Karen

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/8/2009 8:20:00 AM

Well done....lovely thought and sound! ~ Carrie

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/8/2009 7:51:00 AM

Very nice. His contest has lubricated all of our poetic skills. Joyce

Laurie Ginn

Date: 3/8/2009 5:14:00 AM

Oh I love this. Wind chimes have the most alluring property. Great Raul. Good luck.