Footle-Charleston

kick feet off beat

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Luis Estable

Date: 8/21/2017 2:29:00 PM

I dig this. Only four words but in the right order. A poet once said that poetry is words in the right order. I can see that here. PS I have a book of poems on kindle. If you wish a copy, go to Amazon.com and type my name Luis A. Estable or the name of the book, "One Hundred Sonnets, Book Two. Thanks and keep on writing those shorts one. Luis Estable

Brian Strand
Date: 8/21/2017 4:24:00 PM

Yes Luis,thanks for your compliment to this form I labelled the footle form and promoted it some years back,here and elsewhere on the net.Best wishes with your creative endeavours also

Skat A

Date: 9/30/2013 8:03:00 AM

nice little dance................SKAT

Robin L. Gass

Date: 2/5/2009 4:43:00 AM

To flap.....mad cap! These are so much fun, Brian, and you Sir, are the King! Love, Robin

Sharon Winter

Date: 2/4/2009 9:20:00 AM

Goodness gracious, i would probably need oxygen. Last I tried it I was a kid. Smiling here. Love, Shar

Michael Jordan

Date: 2/4/2009 8:40:00 AM

Seems every time I log on to here you are good for a smile Brian, thanks - God Bless, MJ

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/4/2009 8:24:00 AM

I had to do the charleston with a line of girls one time in high school for a music revue. That was so much fun, I remember it well. My legs don't kick that high anymore :)!! ~ Carrie

Laurie Ginn

Date: 2/4/2009 8:13:00 AM

Gosh would that be a fun trip, great job Brian.

Sean Kelly

Date: 2/4/2009 8:09:00 AM

Just missed ..... The Twist ..... You got the site " footle dancin' " , Sir Brian ....

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 2/4/2009 7:57:00 AM

This is aptly titled and so well done. I love watching the Charleston when it's done right. Michael