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Fool's Gold

Fool's gold... In the middle of cross road I stand. My head growing heavier as I stare at various paths, Leading to different directions with various results of course. Tick tock! Tick tock! As the time waits for no man, I knew I have to make a massive decision A decision I have to live with it's consequences. True gold or fool's gold will I reap? Befuddling thoughts kept colliding through my head. As I hear voices whispering through my listening organ. Saying "take this path" , "take that path". The question that kept piercing through my head was...True gold or fool's gold will I reap? I prance as I walk into the path of my choice with the sweat racing all over my body. My fragile heart sinked into the pool of sorrows, As I realised that I have A fool's gold on my palm. 25/11/2016

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Date: 1/15/2017 2:19:00 AM
The poem reminds me of Robert Frosts poem 'The Road Not Taken" I love the catch gold. Great poem love it!!!!
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Date: 1/18/2017 9:51:00 PM
Thanks Joseph. I feel great deep inside knowing that there are people who appreciate and love my work.
Date: 1/11/2017 7:20:00 PM
Reminds me of the song with the same title popularized by LEE GREENWOOD+++.... Nice poem... congrats, Twala
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Date: 1/18/2017 1:13:00 PM
Thanks a lot Bernard.
Date: 11/28/2016 7:23:00 AM
Thanks a lot Madison and i'm glad that you enjoyed my poem.
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Date: 11/28/2016 7:25:00 AM
Thanks a lot Madison and i'm glad that you enjoyed my poem.

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