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'Autumn Lane' by Thomas Kinkade

Fool's Gold We cherish Autumn days when Summer goes... her landscapes of bright colors do amaze. Just like a painting, brilliant hues foreclose the thoughts of Winter gloom post Autumn blaze. Deep rusty red, orange, but mostly gold stretch wide for miles along the country lanes; 'neath deep blue sky and sunny rays, they hold the joy of life we hope and pray remains. Leaves gently fall and coat the waiting ground to warm the earth with their bright colored shawl; and happily, we grasp these days renowned to keep us joyful before Winter pall. But as all things in life follow a scheme, a dimmer time will shade a golden one; this season, in the end, does lose its gleam... fool's gold of Fall turns dull 'neath Winter sun. Sandra M. Haight ~1st Place~ Contest: Autumn Colors Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron Judged: 01/09/2018

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Date: 1/16/2018 11:06:00 PM
My fav of all the autumn poems. It has the rhyme I so love but, also a deeper meaning. Well thought out and penned. A pleasure to read. A well deserved win. Congrats.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/17/2018 7:02:00 PM
Thank you so much, Janece, for the very supportive comments, and congrats. Much appreciated. Sandra
Date: 1/13/2018 9:42:00 AM
Such a charming poem and i love the title and accompanying picture, congrats on your win Sandraa:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/17/2018 7:02:00 PM
Thank you, Jan, for your uplifting comments and congrats. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/10/2018 12:30:00 AM
Congratulations, Sandra on your fine win.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/17/2018 7:04:00 PM
Thank you very much, Subimal. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/9/2018 8:53:00 PM
Charming. A beautiful poem and well deserved win, Sandra.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/17/2018 7:05:00 PM
Thank you, Line, for your uplifting comments! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/19/2016 12:12:00 PM
A sad end to such a joyous retreat, congratulations Sandra...
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Date: 12/17/2016 7:12:00 PM
Beautiful, as always, Sandra. Congratulations. ...Fran
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Date: 12/17/2016 10:58:00 AM
Beautiful writing Sandra, congrats on your win!
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Date: 12/16/2016 8:46:00 PM
Congrats Sandra!! Well done!! Hugggs. Deb
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Date: 12/16/2016 8:26:00 PM
How beautiful and skillfully written--to be added to my favorites! Congrats, Sandra! Janice
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Date: 11/15/2016 5:49:00 PM
Beautifully written and well expressed my friend but I think each season has it's beauty. Each compliments the other. I love the blue and white hues of the winter snow but after Christmas I long for the pastels of Spring. Wonderful job here as always Sandra. God Bless, JB
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/15/2016 11:02:00 PM
Thank you so much for your uplifting comments, Judy. Yes, you are so right about our lovely seasons but I was also using the seasons as a metaphor for stages of life, Autumn being the maturity and brilliance of senior years and how we yearn to hold on to them...but eventually our golden days fade away with Winter. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 11/15/2016 12:40:00 PM
So wonderfully written, the rhyme and meter were spot on in this stunning poem. It almost sand itself to me as I read. Absolutely beautiful.
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Date: 11/15/2016 12:20:00 PM
Another great poem Sandra x
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Date: 11/15/2016 10:40:00 AM
What a beautiful poem this contest has inspired Sandra! All life encompasses impermanence. I hope this does well. : ) 7
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