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Fool's Gold

Was a liar A very clever one, People excepted him, Took him at face value, Fitted in, They seemed to like him, Kept a low key, Worked undercover, Got himself a good name, All the time weaving his web, Pretending to be something he wasn’t, On the surface, he shone Underneath shallow, He made a living Out of pretense, Earning plenty of money, Thinking no one would suspect, He continued without shame, Thought he was great, The real thing, His life was a sham, Fools gold deceived many, 14/11/2016 For competition sponsor Julia Ward

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Date: 11/15/2016 10:37:00 AM
Excellent picture of a con man my friend. So many of them around and they pick their favorite type for prey. Some prey on old people and some prey on young inexperienced people but they are all predators. Great job here. Good luck on the contest. god Bless, JB
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 11/15/2016 11:20:00 AM
Thank you Judy x
Date: 11/14/2016 9:36:00 PM
Good write, Wendy, our politicians are the worst animal. Good luck in the contest Hugs Eve
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 11/15/2016 10:01:00 AM
Thank you Eve x
Date: 11/14/2016 8:14:00 PM
Wendy, there are people just like that in life, well done and best of luck in the contest
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 11/15/2016 3:12:00 AM
Thank you, Broken xx
Date: 11/14/2016 7:08:00 PM
A well written poem, Mrs Wendy. I have found my share of fools gold.Good luck!
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 11/17/2016 2:20:00 PM
Hi thank you, Daniel my whole life has been fools gold lol,
Date: 11/14/2016 6:28:00 PM
Great writing with that. Good luck in the contest :)
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 11/17/2016 2:21:00 PM
Hi Heidi thank you x your so kind x
Date: 11/14/2016 5:43:00 PM
I really enjoyed this, I like how you took your theme in a different direction and showed me a side I didn't expect. Nicely crafted.
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 11/17/2016 2:22:00 PM
Thank you, Chris, nice to meet you x

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