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Foolish Lover

You wore the dress that I picked out sexy black skirt that I raved about You came to me as a flower in bloom I kissed you when you entered the room You lifted your dress I bled out in my shaded bedroom you made me shout Stretched out next to you I said I loved you perhaps too soon as you plumed and plumed I felt like a big baffoon.... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/9/2015 7:05:00 PM
the imagery in this one is simple yet fantastic . A very good one to read on my way off tonight. I really enjoyed it.
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Date: 2/9/2015 4:15:00 PM
You are never sure when to say I love you and never sure how it will be received. As a poet you might reveal your emotions easier than others...I feel.you pain.....Tim
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Date: 2/9/2015 3:34:00 PM
I'm sorry you felt like a buffoon....No one should feel that way. Thanks for the visit, Ken. I also enjoy reading your work.
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Date: 2/9/2015 2:02:00 PM
Love this poem Ken. Janet
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Date: 2/9/2015 1:59:00 PM
- Ken, I always enjoy reading your sweet poems ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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