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Fool

Looking out of the window Sun is shining, sky is so blue But why i feel like a fool? I gave you my heart to take care But you?? You destroyed it Down on my knees, begging you please Come back to me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/3/2011 1:28:00 PM
sad I can remember myself "here" not a pretty picture, love can make a fool out of anyone. Light & Love ;)
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Date: 2/3/2011 8:22:00 AM
You've captured the essence of lost love and its pain beautifully. julie
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Date: 1/30/2011 3:06:00 AM
been there done that. it hurts. move on. T. S.
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Date: 1/30/2011 1:03:00 AM
Well done, Susann! Most of us have been there at one time or another, still, I hope it isn't based on fact! Best wishes, Keith
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