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Fond Memories

through the window i peered intricate layers of lace painted by old man winter obscured my view of any visible signs the snow outside was deep but the emotions inside ran deeper i remember waking Christmas morn empty plate and cup littered the sink fancy gifts. delicately placed beneath the now silent tree giggles of children covered the sounds of ripping paper being scattered about beneath the layers of red, green, gold, topped with only a bow, i recall that doll trying to summersault her way over to me (better than i ever could) little “tumbelina” the only gift i wished for, the only thing that seemed to matter that Christmas day to a child who still believed in the magic of santa, his reindeer and sleigh

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Date: 5/7/2013 8:36:00 AM
Sorry it took me so long to read this Sandra, i remember wishing for just one thing at christmas and getting it. It was as magical as this poem, great write, congrats, Car
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Date: 12/9/2012 10:55:00 AM
Congrats on your win friend Sandra..cheers!! :)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/11/2012 5:07:00 AM
Thank you! Have a lovely day!
Date: 12/8/2012 6:44:00 AM
congrats Sandra on an outstanding write and win luv ..
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/11/2012 5:09:00 AM
Thank you so very much! Have a wonderful week, hope to catch up reading and writing soon! Hugs
Date: 12/8/2012 5:48:00 AM
Big Congratulations Sandra love xx
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/11/2012 5:09:00 AM
Thank you so very much :) hugs
Date: 12/7/2012 10:46:00 PM
oh my, another Thumbellina person!!! I got mine at about age 8 I think. just loved her!!! Congrats on your win.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/11/2012 5:11:00 AM
Thank you so very much, i think i was 7 or 8 myself....loved her more than any gift as a child, she was my friend many years :) Hugs
Date: 12/7/2012 9:42:00 PM
What an awesome write. You capture the excitement of childhood beautifully. Big congrats!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/11/2012 5:11:00 AM
Thank you Heather...i work with kids so always see the magic through them...hugs
Date: 12/7/2012 8:59:00 PM
Sandra, , CONGRATULATIONS :-) ON YOUR XOOL WINNING POEM~LINDA
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/11/2012 5:13:00 AM
Thank you for your sweet replies on my poems...I hope to find more time to check out the contests and catch up on reading and writing :) Hugs
Date: 12/7/2012 6:31:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/11/2012 5:13:00 AM
Thank you so much!
Date: 11/28/2012 1:03:00 PM
Happy memories Sandra ...... time that was and never come back. - Love it, beautifully written!! - Thank you Sandra. - Wish you a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/27/2012 9:20:00 AM
this is surly a beautiful poem a beautiful memory, surly worth being here on soup just to read gems like this. thank you Sandra...
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Date: 11/26/2012 10:59:00 AM
This is so wonderful, days of innocence with the undertow of current realities. A lot more going on here than meets the eye. I enjoyed all the layers you placed within your masterpiece.
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Date: 11/25/2012 8:32:00 PM
fond memories! that's one thing that can't be taken away from us. I hope you have many more in your future. Enjoyed your poem.
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Date: 11/25/2012 7:49:00 PM
Your words make a beautiful wrapping for the memories your poem stirs in me. Fantastic write. Read;{>
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/25/2012 7:58:00 PM
thank you for your beautiful comment!
Date: 11/25/2012 5:51:00 PM
Children's enthusiasms on Christmas Day. Harkens back childhood memories. I wish I could bottle all the fun, surprises and energy that children bring onto Christmas morn. Beautifully written Sandra. Connie
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/25/2012 7:58:00 PM
thank you Connie :)

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