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Fond Farewell

It's harder than we thought-to bid you farewell The memories lived here, those moments to dwell The walls resonating our laughter,absorbing our tears A night's sleep in your arms would allay all our fears. Packing the things from each nook- all that we might, Can't take with us the solace coming back to you each night. Regret the times we failed, could have loved you better Why do you feel like a person,not just our loyal shelter. Those old and wise trees keeping vigil with aplomb Don't know if they will miss us when we are gone. Carrying with us the chatter of squirrels,the songs of birds The tiptoe of spring dawn that beckoned the deer in herds. Our plans and destinations are ephemeral as a line in sand And the flow just now takes us to a different piece of land. Our first love forever and ever you will remain While we try our luck falling in love once again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/27/2016 11:11:00 PM
Sara, Congrats on your fine couplet win. LINDA
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Date: 4/27/2016 11:08:00 AM
Stirs emotions in me Sara. I've moved many times in my life but the last one was the hardest. I could see your poem in the eyes of my two girls when we moved.
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Date: 4/17/2016 8:18:00 AM
WOW< Sara > Amazing... LINDA
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Date: 4/15/2016 2:01:00 PM
brilliant write! Congrats.
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 4/16/2016 9:48:00 PM
Thanks so much!
Date: 4/15/2016 8:57:00 AM
Sara, thank you for being a part of my contest and congrats on your win :)-luloo
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 4/16/2016 9:48:00 PM
Thanks Laura, truly appreciate it.

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